ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED*

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Beautiful update
I loved the past flasback...

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

uhmmm...that;s sad

nice but sad update

thanks for pm x

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

The second part was great
So the significance of the name is out. Loved it
Will wait for the next part J

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Awesome dear please update next part soon

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

So Arnav is from Army. I don't know how this will work out given Khushi and her family is kind of wanted by the army because of some misunderstandings or foul play by someone. I hope justice is served soon to them.
Aww these two think themselves as husband wife since childhood. You can't separate them now J. You dare not!!!
I hope Arnav helps them and pulls them out of the mess they seem to have landed up. I'm also waiting for Arnav's one on one conversation with Khushi.

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Mints23

@mints23

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Jiji... this is such an intense yet adorable story. Despite all the harsh realities, terrorism, traitory and death... there is a light innocence in the characters, that are bound by love so deep... it makes their situations even more complex. I love how Arnav calls Khushi biwi and she calls him miyan, since childhood. Their hearts have been aligned and intricately woven with each other, that despite time and circumstances, the hearts still beat for the other.

Through all this darkness, there is still a flickering hope for the truth to win over treachery. I hope you end it with a positive note, where there is justice for the worthy and happiness to those who deserve it. It is a very sensitive issue, of the country, of terrorism, of traitors and finally the truth. Cannot wait to see how this miyan-biwi duo cross these sensitive lines, to find their happily ever after. Please please please end it on a happy note, woman!! Warna main tujhse kabhi baat nahi karungi! 😛