ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED*

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: jessjazz
What is Arnav doing in that house? And his attitude at first showed he didn't want to help.

I hope part 2 answers all your queries.

thanks Jess 😳

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor
It's a beautiful story with a great start...interesting plot with mystery in it.
Very interesting way to share your nightmare...hope you will be fine after writing it. It is scary with ARSHI strong bond. We will wait and read more about their strong bond.

Thanks a lot for reading.

Yes I am almost okay, as I had wrote the first chapter 2 months back.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Updated the second part. Post 2.

Happy reading.

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Unres.. u know am.giggling like a complete goner 😆 of course who will unres the last part first and then the second..!! :-) only.me always.. *shamelessly smiling again*

Okay coming to the update.. I had read it looong back.. but I forgot my res.. but I am the first.. yaay..Okay I know late shout nevertheless :D even now I was searching for my res.. almost decided to comment afresh :D

Wow chechii... this was just so awesome... it was beautiful and terrorists bombs..woosh.. and two guesses came true.. Again am glad I could follow ur train of thoughts..

I always a protective Arnav and here again I practically swooned over him... Again I am telling u I love this ammi.. par naam kya? Kahin pe u didn't mention :P finally he did help them.. that was so cute.. that "Wait for me" still rings in my ears..

On the whole awesome update.. I seriously loved it chechi.. but God forbid don't get any other dreams likes this... writing is fine.. but let dreams be pleasant and happy.. this comment is short I know.. but check the next update ka.. too big essay.. compensation..

Love you muahs ❤️

Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago

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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: -FriedriceJi-
Thanks Lechu molSuper glad that you were biting your nails.Adutha sampreshanam nale. Marakkathe vayikkuka 😛

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Marannilaa... 😆 ...

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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Innathe samprekshanam... 👏 ...

Nannav miyan and Khushi biwi...

Bachi ko biwi bana Diya Nannav ne...haila ladka bahuth hi badiya hai... 😆...aftr all he is Khushi's Nannav na...
Wat a fast forward thinking genius kids... 😆 ...

Khushi is a perfect daughter who try to shield their little family a lot...
Hmm Khushi's mind wandered around their past *kissing* 😳 experiences and wishing to continue dat ritual today in a more improved version wid her Nannav... 😳 ...watever da situation Arshi just want some alone tym dey will start Deir Rabba vey 😆 ...

U scared me at the end... ...
Cont soon chechi 😉 ...

Waiting...for...MORE...

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Awesome update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

awesome ...it may be a your nightmare but its also a reality of our everyday...its nothing to do with being a hindu, muslim or sikh or christians ...its when every body say i and my religion is best..