ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED*

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Yippie!!
I became a Rockerz now. 😃

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ameena671

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

wow amazing update loved it can't wait for next part.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Had a big lump in my throat while reading it
that was beautiful story
made me so much emotional
great work <3
looking forward to the next part

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KBS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Oh her abbu died!!!

Feeling bad!!!

Arshi's childhood scenes were awesome!

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Awesome part
Loved it

Loved the flashback

Their childhood scenes were so cute

Thanks for the pm

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Hello

So, here ends "Crossing the lines"

I hope you enjoyed this different take. I think this was the genre I did not try before, I dont know how this "try" turned out. Thank you everyone for reading and liking this short story.

And a special mention to Sadh123 & cheesemad for encouraging me with their beautiful comments when I was feeling so down.

I might come up with an epilogue very soon. I want to give a proper closure to their journey.

Love

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Unres.. I know u think am.mad.. I am the most shameless creature here.. arreh u have thanked me? But for what? As I didn't unres last update bhi.. okay kaan pakadthi hoon.. was not well.. I have scraped u the reason too 😭

But seriously? Why u thanked me? Yaar I loved ur story.. that's why comments flowed.. so anyhow thanks ke liye.. anytime for u babe.. love you 😛

Wow brilliant closure.. I loved this new kinda work of yours.. so thrilling.. it was like running, chasing, firing, death and yet there is love, affection, care and trust.. trust that life will move and there is a future..

Oh I loved how Arnav protected them.. the innocent and not the traitor.. oh my! Khushi's dad? Seriously? What a man! Disgusting!

Really ammi is one strong woman.. kudos to her.. and their bond was so cute and adorable.. Arnav keep supporting ur Khushi always..

The strong Khushi... hmm.and the confession.. oh all the years of pain, suppression, loneliness, love.. they all resurface.. okay my guess was right.. yipeee happy dance.. their seal of love with a kiss.. muahs to u for that..

Oh and the horror again.. Khushi one brave girl.. fulfilling her mother's last wish.. and almost sacrificing herself.. but Arnav will.never allow.. Will he? Great let the militant go to hell.. I don't care for them at all..

Finally free of their baggage of the past.. hope there is a very colorful future awaiting their presence..

Okay now regarding ur writing.. this is one different genre of urs.. and u took it off with remarkable ease.. it wasn't too Much of violence and the same time u put ur thoughts across.. and the beautiful love story you crafted as the story progresses was magical..

The best message was.. No matter what, life cannot stop for anyone.. it is up to u whether you wanna wail or live!

I loved it.. thanks for giving us yet another beautiful creation 😉

Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago