ArHi TS: Crossing the lines *COMPLETED*

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ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

amid all the fighting life still moves on ,you can still dream on ...loved it

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Amazing update
Loved it
Well written
Superb ending
Thanks for the pm

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Mints23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

What a dramatic ending!! There was so much that happened. Revelations, love, deceit and action. It was sad that Khushi's father was the culprit all along. But her mother and bhabhi needed to know the truth. There is no point grieving and respecting a man, who is the main reason of their downfall. How could a father kill his own son!! Sigh!! The terrible teachings of terrorism... they have no religion, no family... no humanity! Through this all, I am glad Arnav and Khushi could find some time alone, to share their feelings for each other. And I am hoping that they would not have to keep running and hiding all their lives. Love will definitely find its way... 😳

Bravo Jiji... beautifully writien, thrilling story!! Totally enjoyed it!!