arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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jeetega

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

fabulous update. especially liked the brother sister conversation. also arnav's opening up infront of kushi.
waiting for the next update!

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: aarwen

Indi di I really appreciate you explainiyaing.

yes videsh brings out interesting stuff.. it brought out my love for writing.. and of course you all here and IPK are my inspiration.. so thank you videsh.. though thankfully never really matters where I am, as long as I am with the one i am meant to be with... and now added to that need a pen and paper to complete my happiness.

A lot of times I am just curious, as someone writing for the very first time and absolutely going crazy over it..with it.. Its like am in an all day lecture taking notes whenever I can. Thank you sincerely for always caring enough and indulging my curiosity.

writing is a bit of a bug, isn't it?

i never have thought of myself as "writer" despite being a copywriter for twenty years.

but h i have discovered i love to write... and am always not really happy with whatever i write... but sometimes i won't lie, i am... when i read by abs chance, chapters of my fan fic a few years on, i hope i do not cringe.

i know writing has got you. it's one of the best ailments ever... don't you think?

videsh and its open attitude, it's can do thing... very liberating for those who come from spaces where it's a bit more skewed to nahiiin. that was what i liked about going to that land at thirteen... suddenly everything felt possible.

no need to thank, i value your opinion... now let's do the nagin.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: jeetega
fabulous update. especially liked the brother sister conversation. also arnav's opening up infront of kushi.
waiting for the next update!

hi jeetega,

thanks so much... meeting you for the first time, so happy you enjoy without you... yes, that bro sis pair, they are lovely... real somehow. will try to update soon. see you.

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Indi, such a beautiful contrast between what he was feeling and what he was physically doing. His need to shy away from them and justify them in what is perceived logic,for him, painfully apparent.

And then you showed how much has changed with him wanting her to do exactly what she thinks is right and will make her happy. I loved the way you wrote of his thought process about taking his company forward. So many entrepreneurs reach a certain stage and then plateau. It is a further indication of the good place he's at in his life, as is also shown in his conversation with Di.

Garima - how many of us thank God for what we have and not moan about what we don't. Her values and beliefs are reflected in her children. It was delightful reading of a chirpy Khushi driving Bhuaji crazy with her questions. Just what you'd imagine her doing!

I really liked the way you wrote of all the times Khushi had rushed to hug him going through his mind, as she did just that again. As always, he's there for her, hamesha. Now freely accepting her and giving her the comfort she needs.

Once again a great update, with the opening paragraphs being particularly superlative Indi.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#535

Gosh... how i missed the Raizadas... it feels so good to have them back... in their own selves... Aakash... Payal... Mamiji... Di... even Om Prakash ji... missed them all... loved Arnav's convo with his Di... saach mein, waqt kitna badal gaya... Aaj Arnav Singh Raizada is talking about feeling, oops, not feelings, love... second chance... happiness... this is not less than any dream-comes0true moment for us... and loved ArShi moments... how he wanted her to get all the freedom... how he placed her wish above his own... how he comforted her when she was troubled... their drink-time... and this bus-ride... superb... loved it all didi... waiting for more already... continue soonwa...

PS : forgot to mention... loved their marriage scene... she was his... no matter what... BEAUTIFUL... and also the little Sanka Devi's never ending questions... loved what buaji said about shyam(dark thing)... so true...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 10 years ago