arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: archmink
In this chapte it was lil bit of all of them ... I really like seeing Anjali moveing on and not clinging to her brother ... They are spending this much needed time in London with each other ... Ohh I just love the husband that he is asking or rather wanting to have a drink with his wife .,,, and omg what was that he was thinking to make love in this bus...
Just love the whole part ... I like how you include the past and the present together

hi archmink,

yes, the family comes into the narration again, asr and khushi's story i feel means so much because it has such a deep link to their families and their love for their own. you like him wanting to share a drink with him? i loved it actually, such a natural desire... he he the bus thoughts, he has a happy wildness in him, na?

thank you for liking the chapter... see you soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: Janu75
Khushi just complements Arnav !
Finally the secret about babujis stoke has come out.

Shyam and black ...and the bad deeds ...metaphorical

So nirupa Roy has confessed to romantic raizada... 😆

hi janu,

thanks for reading... yes, time we all heard about babu ji's assailant. and nirupa roy has quite akaran johar bro don't you think? ha ha, see you soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: ammavedu80
Wonderful chapter
Asr initiating conversation with his di about her feelings is nice
As usual kushi is crazy

hi ammavedu,

thanks for liking the chapter and the asr di conversation. he really can't be completely himself and happy unless he knows she is alright... and though she is feeling calmer, and though initially he was very perturbed to hear about doc verma taking his sister out, something is coming together inside him... and perhaps anjali needed this push... i felt happy writing it. anjali has always told him of love and its importance in his life, lovely i thought that now he wants that for her, understands how integral it is to happiness and does not want his sister to miss out on a chance.

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.Brooke.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Wonderful update.Arnav Khushi made for each other,complete each other,no one can come between them not even any misunderstanding,pain or past.How beautifully they sorted out things ❤️

Love the bus scene(was that double decker)Now whenever I saw a bus I will imagining maybe this the bus ArHi having fun in.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: .Brooke.
Wonderful update.Arnav Khushi made for each other,complete each other,no one can come between them not even any misunderstanding,pain or past.How beautifully they sorted out things ❤️
Love the bus scene(was that double decker)Now whenever I saw a bus I will imagining maybe this the bus ArHi having fun in.

yes, double decker, teehee sarah, and they are sitting right in front on the upper deck... asr would never dream of hiding in the back seat and he is getting up to all sorts of things that would have normally made khushi blush, but she is high and just loving it... when you find them, please tell them i am waiting for them here, they need to get back soon, okay?

he he, thanks, sarah, i am glad you liked the update... they will have many scraps in their lives, but ultimately that feeling of theirs, it will surely help them find a way...

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Awesome chapters 34 and 35...thanks for the PM

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Loved it.

so many things happened in this chapter.

Arnav and Khushis' mature conversation at the beginning to their delirium at the end.

Arnav is a pragmatic man. he never wanted Khushi to change for him. That's a great quality we rarely find in men. it's good that he also gave Khushi the right to be angry and rebel if needed. but Khushi changed after the wedding. Initially she used to antagonize him a lot, but later in the show we saw her rather compromising. How you show her, it's up to you though.

Arnav thought about Verma. good. Anjali also should think about it seriously. Life must not end with a swindler and pervert husband like Shyam. This anjali in your story is stronger and sensible, what I admired.

Mami was cute! I enjoyed how she took care of Payal. OP has learned english!😆 I'm impressed. Khushi should be here in India during the birth of Payal's baby. Remember she wanted to name them aloo and poori.

It was great that Khushi's babuji finally got out from the wheel chair and revealed more dirty secret of Shyam. It was always my complain that he was never recovered and couldn't reveal shyam's truth in the show.

it was so lovely when Khushi ran to Arnav when she was upset with her dad.

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nisso

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Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Thank! 😊 awesome update!
i read the in one go!
loved it!🤗

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Shalma/Suman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#559

That was an awesome chap di. The battle b/w Arnav's mind & heart yet one thing clear that khushi was his, only his for six months, for forever to hate & to love.

Arnav was very happy & energetic in d morning but he sensed khushi's disturbed behaviour. He realised that even though forgiving is easy, forgetting is not. I m so glad dat arnav talked abt his feelings wid her. He wants her to enjoy her freedom, choti & badi khushis, be herself. He wants her enjoy what his mother was deprived of.

khushi & arnav drunk were cute. Arnav & his sinful thoughts. Yes, Arnav this is a very valid point. There is no ban on kissing & making love to ur khushi in khushi's red car-er bus...

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rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#560

Khushi and Arnav drunk and Khushi taking Arnav on a ride on her red car... Um bus. Was awesome. Where Arnav wanted to do totally different things in the solace of there bedroom. 😉

But yeah he can surely kiss his Khushi in her big red.

The chapter was a real good one with Arnav's thought during the day of contract marriage, to him understanding Khushi's mood and hurt of giving up something which he didn't like (glad that they talked) to him talking to Anjali and discussing about love and second chances. All this showed how Khushi transformed this ruthless arrogant and non believer of love ASR to a passionate understanding lover.

What's new is on ASR mind and yours for the direction of this story?