arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

[for me ,Arnav needs khushi in his life than Arnav in khushis life...khushi finds her life in every other thing and person...but Arnav ..khushi is life ...that's why May be during the bachelor party it was Arnav who said that he cannot live without her"

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Originally posted by: janu6669
Indi ..I love this part as it brings the subtle nature of ASR and the calmness he preferred in his life...the way he looks at her and feels her presence ...the longing to spend his life with her all the while staying in his own comfort zone...he craves for her mentally ,psychologically...without her ...there is no existence for him and hence the apt title "without you..."
Well khushi has come fully prepared and I don't want embarrassment for khushi as was during their in the serial then..the basic etiquette ...

janu, 😳

love that in pink. asr's nature... it is interesting to try and get it. man is subtle yes, also parts of him i feel are shut down still and may remain that way because he is that way... your delving into how he needs her... beautiful. it never was a big solitaire diamond romance... something else there making it rare all the while. you know i fell for him when he gave her a company for karwa chauth...

he craves her... yes, needs her to feel alive again, to believe even maybe... to trust. and she needs him, to know happiness is her right too, and she has the right over someone who is entirely hers, no compromise. he opens new worlds to her and she pushes open doors of worlds he has seen before and perhaps has lost faith in... i get carried away when i think of them..

embarrassment for khushi... uh huh... not done. not when he is around and not when she is as smart as she really is.

good to see you.

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divsarunfan

@divsarunfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

very nice update👏
superb di👏👏
loved it di

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Janu75
[for me ,Arnav needs khushi in his life than Arnav in khushis life...khushi finds her life in every other thing and person...but Arnav ..khushi is life ...that's why May be during the bachelor party it was Arnav who said that he cannot live without her"
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janu, 😳

love that in pink. asr's nature... it is interesting to try and get it. man is subtle yes, also parts of him i feel are shut down still and may remain that way because he is that way... your delving into how he needs her... beautiful. it never was a big solitaire diamond romance... something else there making it rare all the while. you know i fell for him when he gave her a company for karwa chauth...

he craves her... yes, needs her to feel alive again, to believe even maybe... to trust. and she needs him, to know happiness is her right too, and she has the right over someone who is entirely hers, no compromise. he opens new worlds to her and she pushes open doors of worlds he has seen before and perhaps has lost faith in... i get carried away when i think of them..

embarrassment for khushi... uh huh... not done. not when he is around and not when she is as smart as she really is.

good to see you.

without a doubt, khushi is his life.

and as things move she finds out he is hers too.

but yes, asr i think has always loved her with a passion and intensity and need that knows no bounds, that has no limit or endpoint... somehow he always seemed to love her more. i guess there is no political correctness in love.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: anu1017
Awesome update indi Di, loved it 👏

It is so laid back and happy wala update after so many action packed updates lol!!! It will be fun read Arshi alone and exploring England as I am sure Khushi will cause cause a couple of international incidents hehehe!!!

Cannot wait for more updates filled with happiness 😊

archana,

thanks and oh yes, a little time for just happiness to roll in and play with them... they do need this and deserve it and more... and what better place than one of the most resplendent cities in the world to do it? laad governor land it is ha ha.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: ranogill
i just read all 30 chapters again...what a story...story of ipkknd and more running before my eyes like a film...and want to read next chapter as soon as possible..please

ranogill,

really? you did that? i am floored... it worked nicely, the story... ohh i am so happy... i read random chapters but never all at a stretch.. so good to hear it's reading well together... thank you... and yes, soon... this tuesday evening i will certainly update.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Indi lovely update as always.

Loved seeing an airport through your Khushi's eyes. You really brought out the vibrancy and sheer mix of humanity present so well.

His apartment really sounds elegant.

And now waiting to see more of London.

Loved your VM - you did more justice to this beautiful song than was done in the actual serial.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: Arshi67
Indi lovely update as always.
Loved seeing an airport through your Khushi's eyes. You really brought out the vibrancy and sheer mix of humanity present so well.
His apartment really sounds elegant.
And now waiting to see more of London.
Loved your VM - you did more justice to this beautiful song than was done in the actual serial.

arshi,

thanks so much... 😃.

you liked airport? i was wondering how she wopuld react teh first time she saw a mega one... heathrow... uff. his apartment is elegant, h i feel like going there. you know i like his taste especially in colours and the whole uncluttered thing... he is a stylish man... in shantivan there are touches of the family in his room perhaps... but here... uh huh... his bachelor's pad.

more london soon... and thanks so much for liking the vm.

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Just the two of them for 2 weeks ! WOW !

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Another amazing update! truly loving this story!Because for some minutes every few days it allows me to lose myself in IPKKND... kind of breath with them.. feel them around me..its almost tangible and I love these parallel IPK stories that manage to weave that magic around me and give me a piece of heaven even for a few minutes before reality crashes back again..

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Thanks for the pm. I must admit that I will need to read the story so get back into it and then comment. It will take some time but I will get there eventually!