arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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Kavyasarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Superb update.
Thanx for the PM.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: kamtokdin
Pls continue. its absorbing.

hi kamtokdin,

thanks... hoping to update tuesday, see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
beautiful update Di... there's a change in the air, and i'm already loving this change... waiting to see whats ahead in their life, how they slowly but surely move ahead... and what i love most is how well he knows whats she's gonna say next... its cute... lovely update, and thanks for the pm...

thanks, nishu_shorna... felt the story needed to breathe easy a littel and grow in other directions... khushi and asr ultimately are more than just the shenanigans if shyam and others... hoping to discover them more and more. see you... you always say you love this story, can't tell you how happy i feel when i hear that.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: wiwy
What a beautiful chapter In di, a nice laid back peaceful feel to it. After what they have been through they needed some quiet happy time alone. And you have given them just that. I am sure they wil have a blissful time in UK till you decide to add another twist to the tale, right? For a moment i thought Arnav was asking her to say she wanted to make love to him and you would give us a high flying romantic scene. Something like Cyn's remember? But they landed gently. I guess you are too proper to use bhookh as a double meaning word ...but are you? Lol! 🤗

hi wiwy,

you liked? i thought the story needed a change of pace and to grow more... beyond the past, looking for the future and yes asr khushi finding each other... another twist? maybe a waltz this time... 😆

na na. i'll just let the tale take me where it wishes to go and sign out when a sigh comes... no plans really... started out to see if i could kill him off. i couldn't... he wouldn't let me and she would make my life miserable if i dared... this discovery was what this whole venturing into fan fiction gave me i think. truly powerful characters and a promise are these two.. that is why i can even begin to write...

was bhookh a telltale word that slipped out and spoke really of my hunger... 😆 hugs back, sir.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Indi😊
This new change was inevitable to escape from what they've been through especially Arnav who is still under those tormented moments.His addition of painful memories is really dragging him away from his joyful life with KHushi and that shows how much he is trying hard not to be snatched away from em by focusing on Lappy and work even in his plane but KHUSHI's sight is what soothes him but the pain of this third woman of his life is all he cares right now.

Now their life is taking new turn, new change and he wants to spend time with his wife making her his over and over ...knowing what she wants and likes and gets scared of.Your "cut out" sneaks here in the plane...when she is holding him for life as she was never in the plane...

Bhook...a word with many many meanings..."a hunger of search" what I grasped here...because that is very much screaming through his actions and words ...yes he is searching some cold, some hot, some cozy, some serene, some joyful moments,... some attachment, some memories, some bliss, some light, some passion within him to cherish , and some one who can remove all the darkness within, about everything and embrace him , hide him so he can explre a new chapter of his life while opening eyes with rise of sun in a new direction as he is in the WEST not in the EAST right now and that is what he is on his way to search with Khushi...Hope I made sense .

Thnx 😊

hi faiqa,

yes a change was needed. if we are to live, then the next day must be allowed to come and we slowly pick up its rhythm, believe in its promise. i can't leave them stuck for life in the breathless mayhem of sheeshmahal... what is a powerful feeling is really the exploration here i guess... in without you. what can an emotion really do... can it do anything? i may have a thousand preconceived notions but i must find my way convincingly through to them, that is what i am trying i guess.

beautiful bhookh para. i was not thinking of anything when i wrote bhookh, but maybe all of this was bringing me to this word... i just knew there was hunger in the whole thing and she articulated it... perhaps, as i told wiwy... there was my hunger too.

thanks so much for that thought filled comment... i hope i find my way through this without becoming too smarmy or too serious... ipk always had perfect pitching... i'd hate to lose that.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: ARS24
awesome update
thank u for pm 😉

thanks so much, ars... good to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Kavya_sarun
Superb update.
Thanx for the PM.

kavya_sarun,

thank you so much for reading. i am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: indi52

hi wiwy,

you liked? i thought the story needed a change of pace and to grow more... beyond the past, looking for the future and yes asr khushi finding each other... another twist? maybe a waltz this time... 😆

na na. i'll just let the tale take me where it wishes to go and sign out when a sigh comes... no plans really... started out to see if i could kill him off. i couldn't... he wouldn't let me and she would make my life miserable if i dared... this discovery was what this whole venturing into fan fiction gave me i think. truly powerful characters and a promise are these two.. that is why i can even begin to write...

was bhhokh a telltale word that slipped out and spoke really of my hunger... 😆 hugs back, sir.

Oh great! I am looking forward to the waltz! Phew! Am i relieved you have given up on killing him off. My tears and trepidations could not move you Ha ha! Only asr and khushi could! And they dint let you! I knew you were so into them, now i feel the flowering ever more...thanks beautiful to know you not and know you dearest In di

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Awesome update indi Di, loved it 👏

It is so laid back and happy wala update after so many action packed updates lol!!! It will be fun read Arshi alone and exploring England as I am sure Khushi will cause cause a couple of international incidents hehehe!!!

Cannot wait for more updates filled with happiness 😊

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

i just read all 30 chapters again...what a story...story of ipkknd and more running before my eyes like a film...and want to read next chapter as soon as possible..please