arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: sohara
It was quiet a short update.
Enjoyed so much.
Wow, Khushi is in london with her Arnavji. I'm elated.
Can you make her wear some nice western outfits? I really wish to see her out of that gaudy suits.
For the first time they are all by themselves in their own house without family, specially away from intruder Anjali. 😆 Great! they can make love anywhere they want.😉
They are trying to move on from their haunted past. But still I can see Arnav just can't get them out of his mind. I know it will take time. As long as khushi his oxygen cylinder with him, nothing is invincible.

hi sohara,

short, was it? okay will make up in the next one. 😆 then don't say, kitni likhtin hain aap, mami ji. you are so right and i too need to see khushi experiment, because i think she is the sort who would love to... open minded girl and she knows what makes her arnav ji's heart go haywire. so good with her chiffon sarees, bet she will be something else in a skirt or dress or whatever... am working on it. ha ha ha he has a small bachelor's pad... but yes, wherever... whenever and nooo hp.

thanks for having fun... see you soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: pooja102
awesum

thanks, pooja, great to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: nadianatalie
Amazing! 😛

thanks, nadianatalie... and it's good to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Beautiful update. Finally they are alone. They badly needed it. Hope this trip will bring them closer than ever. Thanks for the PM :)

thanks, rizarshi,

badly is right... so much has been in and around them all the while... a bit of freedom and time to be together... i hope i can write this part with feeling and sensitivity... thanks for reading and liking and the comment. see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: janu6669
Indi ..I love this part as it brings the subtle nature of ASR and the calmness he preferred in his life...the way he looks at her and feels her presence ...the longing to spend his life with her all the while staying in his own comfort zone...he craves for her mentally ,psychologically...without her ...there is no existence for him and hence the apt title "without you..."
Well khushi has come fully prepared and I don't want embarrassment for khushi as was during their in the serial then..the basic etiquette ...

janu, 😳

love that in pink. asr's nature... it is interesting to try and get it. man is subtle yes, also parts of him i feel are shut down still and may remain that way because he is that way... your delving into how he needs her... beautiful. it never was a big solitaire diamond romance... something else there making it rare all the while. you know i fell for him when he gave her a company for karwa chauth...

he craves her... yes, needs her to feel alive again, to believe even maybe... to trust. and she needs him, to know happiness is her right too, and she has the right over someone who is entirely hers, no compromise. he opens new worlds to her and she pushes open doors of worlds he has seen before and perhaps has lost faith in... i get carried away when i think of them..

embarrassment for khushi... uh huh... not done. not when he is around and not when she is as smart as she really is.

good to see you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: akankha
very lovely update. Loved it.

hi akankha,

thanks for liking the chapter, glad glad glad you enjoyed.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

beautiful update Di... there's a change in the air, and i'm already loving this change... waiting to see whats ahead in their life, how they slowly but surely move ahead... and what i love most is how well he knows whats she's gonna say next... its cute... lovely update, and thanks for the pm...

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

What a beautiful chapter In di, a nice laid back peaceful feel to it. After what they have been through they needed some quiet happy time alone. And you have given them just that. I am sure they wil have a blissful time in UK till you decide to add another twist to the tale, right? For a moment i thought Arnav was asking her to say she wanted to make love to him and you would give us a high flying romantic scene. Something like Cyn's remember? But they landed gently. I guess you are too proper to use bhookh as a double meaning word ...but are you? Lol! 🤗

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Indi😊

This new change was inevitable to escape from what they've been through especially Arnav who is still under those tormented moments.His addition of painful memories is really dragging him away from his joyful life with KHushi and that shows how much he is trying hard not to be snatched away from em by focusing on Lappy and work even in his plane but KHUSHI's sight is what soothes him but the pain of this third woman of his life is all he cares right now.

Now their life is taking new turn, new change and he wants to spend time with his wife making her his over and over ...knowing what she wants and likes and gets scared of.Your "cut out" sneaks here in the plane...when she is holding him for life as she was never in the plane...

Bhook...a word with many many meanings..."a hunger of search" what I grasped here...because that is very much screaming through his actions and words ...yes he is searching some cold, some hot, some cozy, some serene, some joyful moments,... some attachment, some memories, some bliss, some light, some passion within him to cherish , and some one who can remove all the darkness within, about everything and embrace him , hide him so he can explre a new chapter of his life while opening eyes with rise of sun in a new direction as he is in the WEST not in the EAST right now and that is what he is on his way to search with Khushi...Hope I made sense .

Thnx 😊

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago