arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

^^^

nisso,

thank you so much. good to see you.

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Sunara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

aww cute last bit lol!
Well actually it was an update like a roller-coaster ride of emotions..pain, anguish, confusion, hope, desolation, togetherness, loss, finding each other back..forgiveness, acceptance, coming to terms with the past, letting go and taking steps towards the future..

its perfect!

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

this is beautiful didi... you have portrayed it amazingly... the pains... the hurts... the helplessness... yet some rays of happiness... tender cares... togetherness... and lots of love... each of them i can feel... like literally feeling them... having the journey with them... even sometimes it feels like living their life... its an amazing experience Di... may be thats the reason i love Without You this much... loved the whole update Di... waiting for them to reach the land of angrez...

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: princessunara
aww cute last bit lol!
Well actually it was an update like a roller-coaster ride of emotions..pain, anguish, confusion, hope, desolation, togetherness, loss, finding each other back..forgiveness, acceptance, coming to terms with the past, letting go and taking steps towards the future..

its perfect!

thanks, princessunara,

i was worried that khushi in deep anguish may be hard on everybody, especially her... need not have worried, asr is always more shatir, more problem solving than i will ever be. glad to read you liked the chapter.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
this is beautiful didi... you have portrayed it amazingly... the pains... the hurts... the helplessness... yet some rays of happiness... tender cares... togetherness... and lots of love... each of them i can feel... like literally feeling them... having the journey with them... even sometimes it feels like living their life... its an amazing experience Di... may be thats the reason i love Without You this much... loved the whole update Di... waiting for them to reach the land of angrez...

nishu_shorna,

thank you so much... maybe without you is my way of not letting them just disappear from my life, maybe i write with intimacy because i want to be there on that daily episode tracing their many emotions every day... many which can't be traced... those are the ones that don't let me go...

you just move me with that love of yours for without you. i will always hope though i don't say it much, that a day will come when we will enter the next phase of life with asr and khushi, in a new season, with barun sobti and sanaya irani as the two... ved raj/gautam hegde (yes, no matter how mad i get, they have a feel for asr kkgsr), raju singh, arshad khan, hitesh kevaliya, and maybe even gul as the creatives, i am sure nissar parvez was also key in creating our experience of these two... of course the original caste with my favourite mami, nani, bua, everyone, and a new man for anjali... one doesn't have to know much about movies to sense doctor vijay verma is based on deewar's vijay. and now the original angry young man is coming to act in a tv serial. i hope all these things are mad signs and who knows, in a couple of years... maybe just maybe.

i pretty much set out to write a continuation to the ipk we saw in without you... actually, nishu_shorna, there is a lot to delve into based on ipk season 1... this is a long running story... if you want to make it so.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: indi52

nishu_shorna,

thank you so much... maybe without you is my way of not letting them just disappear from my life, maybe i write with intimacy because i want to be there on that daily episode tracing their many emotions every day... many which can't be traced... those are the ones that don't let me go...

you just move me with that love of yours for without you. i will always hope though i don't say it much, that a day will come when we will enter the next phase of life with asr and khushi, in a new season, with barun sobti and sanaya irani as the two... ved raj/gautam hegde (yes, no matter how mad i get, they have a feel for asr kkgsr), raju singh, arashad khan, hitesh kevaliya, and maybe even gul as the creatives, i am sure nissar parvez was also key in creating our experience of these two... of course the original caste with my favourite mami, nani, bua, everyone, and a new man for anjali... one doesn't have to know much about movies to sense doctor vijay verma is based on deewar's vijay. and now the original angry young man is coming to act in a tv serial. i hope all these things are mad signs and who knows, in a couple of years... maybe just maybe.

i pretty much set out to write a continuation to the ipk we saw in without you... actually, nishu_shorna, there is a lot to delve into based on ipk season 1... this is a long running story... if you want to make it so.

Di, u realize naa, just how wonderful a dream you just wove... and dreaming is what we can always do... some day, it may come true... ONE DAY... InShaAllah...

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jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Beautiful update . poor khushi - you described her emotions perfectly. So glad that Arnav could see through her act & did something about it.

The flight part was adorable but what Arnav is reading and not romancing with his wife on the flight !

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Archana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

I have been following this story from the very beginning glad that the past has been confronted and it going to take both of them time to put it in perspective , very touching how he can read his wife nowadays and waits to let her tell him her fears looking fwd to their trip to London and khushie perspective

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janu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

With this update I think ,the past has left them and finally good days are in the near sight for the raizadas.

Good that they came out of it and the way Arnav shushed khushi makes me believe that he has come a long way with khushi indeed.

Khushi longing for her mother and feeling the pain her mother felt...is all she could do now and very touching.

The humor at the end of the update made me grin what with an emotional update all along.

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Lovely update In di.🤗Arnav said pain has to be borne, you can't escape f it...now maybe Khushi will talk to the stars and clutch her pink purse without hurting inside and give the Brits a dose of their own medicine!😃