arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: akankha
Good update.

thank you so much, akankha, good to see you.

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1987Trisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Oh...what a master piece... i must say...

you always make me fall in love with your writing again & again & again...

they both are in so much pain...but m sure they will pass through it...with the love they both share...

it will heal them slowly slowly...

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: 1987Trisha
Oh...what a master piece... i must say...
you always make me fall in love with your writing again & again & again...
they both are in so much pain...but m sure they will pass through it...with the love they both share...
it will heal them slowly slowly...

in pink, trisha... do i? oh g dhakdhak dhakdhak as i read your line. aisa kyun hota hai? thanks so so much.

thanks for letting a non ipk writer make you feel all things ipk. i am so happy.

see you soon.

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Barunz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Beautiful !!!!

Sometimes I just want to believe n feel that such connection between two lovers or soul mates does exist... Where you just need one glance or touch or just presence of her to calm your unfocused mind ,where words are not even required to know the pain n turbulence she is gng through , where you just know how to ease her turmoil just by BIENG there n soothing her thoughts...

These two share the most amazing n incredible bond ever that just leaves me in Awe

Waiting to see the laad governor n his lucknowi pinky at the land of angrez😆

Thnks for pm

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: march2011
its full of emotion indi

hi march,

thanks, i hope you liked. i get a bit emotional while writing i think. 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: ravalisharma06
Wonderfu update...
beautifully written!!
loved it

hi ravalisharma,
thanks and lovely to see you... glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Barunz4ever
Beautiful !!!!
Sometimes I just want to believe n feel that such connection between two lovers or soul mates does exist... Where you just need one glance or touch or just presence of her to calm your unfocused mind ,where words are not even required to know the pain n turbulence she is gng through , where you just know how to ease her turmoil just by BIENG there n soothing her thoughts...
These two share the most amazing n incredible bond ever that just leaves me in Awe
Waiting to see the laad governor n his lucknowi pinky at the land of angrez😆
Thnks for pm

hi barunz4ever,

maybe just maybe there are relationships where such things do happen... no, not all the time, but enough for one to sense a tie beyond the purely material. or maybe it's a story we tell ourselves, our insides filled with a longing for such a tie even before we learn to think or speak.

i wonder at times was romance and love as we understand it now purely an invention of the human mind and came about as we grew more complex as animals... or was this part of original make up... to seek a pernanent link with something outside of ourselves, to gaze out there and yearn for something beyond.

ah guess i'll never know... but something about asr khushi felt real, despite corny gust of wind and catching falling 😆 and other things... maybe the acting, damn must have been the acting 😃. but yeah, no one can convince me a little bit of this doesn't exist.

take care... me rambling. loved your comment.