arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: jg12
Beautiful update . poor khushi - you described her emotions perfectly. So glad that Arnav could see through her act & did something about it.

The flight part was adorable but what Arnav is reading and not romancing with his wife on the flight !

jg,

the man is pretty compartmentalised in his thinking i think... has never romanced in a flight 😆 maybe something will make him see his folly. thanks so much for enjoying the chapter. nasty disturbing things they both are dealing with and emotionally demanding, maybe even destructive... yeah, good thing he senses her and get her to express things. khushi never says it when it hurts, always mindful of others, hates disturbing anyone on her behalf... lovely traits, but sometimes that can be a problem... as now and asr who is deemed to be insensitive actually gets certain things like very few can... must be all that economist and forbes reading. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Archu61
I have been following this story from the very beginning glad that the past has been confronted and it going to take both of them time to put it in perspective , very touching how he can read his wife nowadays and waits to let her tell him her fears looking fwd to their trip to London and khushie perspective

thanks, archu for reading all the way... i am glad you stayed through all teh rather difficult days of their lives, this story was never easy to think or write, but i love it... no idea why, i just do... thank you and yes, now for some serious asr khushi romance, really enough of the baddies. of course khushi in london, the mind boggles.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: janu6669
With this update I think ,the past has left them and finally good days are in the near sight for the raizadas.
Good that they came out of it and the way Arnav shushed khushi makes me believe that he has come a long way with khushi indeed.
Khushi longing for her mother and feeling the pain her mother felt...is all she could do now and very touching.

The humor at the end of the update made me grin what with an emotional update all along.

janu,

sorry for the wretched emotions that was in most of the chapter... like khushi i wanted to run to the stars but the pink purse insisted the truth be faced... tell you these inanimate imaginary objects, the ridiculous amount of power they wield. but at last we are in that plane to london, the big ancient city with its formidable ranis and now madam on her way... i wonder what khushi would have to say about the koh i noor... or the khule aam kissing on the roads, the buses, the trains, the parliament house, the food, oh gah, i would love to hear a conversation between khushi and obelix about the british idea of khana.

thanks for liking the upbeat ending, see you soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: wiwy
Lovely update In di.🤗Arnav said pain has to be borne, you can't escape f it...now maybe Khushi will talk to the stars and clutch her pink purse without hurting inside and give the Brits a dose of their own medicine!😃

hi wiwy,

the poor people of london, soon the sanka landeth. thanks for reading, sir... glad you enjoyed.

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nisha_mehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Wonderdul part
Khushi and arnav are on their way to london.
Continue soon

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

^^^

thanks asha, so glad you liked. hopefully early next week will continue.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Indi 👏

The mother's story and how her last straw of hope for these kids is taking new shape here...right under that rain...under their heart which know how they feel and talk without words...

Arnav who has lost everything but he got everything in her...his mother's wishes and khushi's mother's efforts brought these two together...as I heard and read somewhere...mother's prayers and wishes never go unheard and sometimes these come true even after her death ...especially for their kids...I do believe in it..strongly

Khushi who always lives by her name and trait...keeping her chin up for others but there is one soul who knows the storm under the silence...

Love the part he found answer in her touch...deep need of a man in distress...and her is his shoulder so she can just let it go...make herself free and he knows how to do that...and he did ...

Finally grey clouds of past have been passed though after rain but that rain has submerged , drenched them in deep , saturated fully damped state of " SOUL MERGER" and from that point no hate, no worries, no nothing can snatch their own joy of little thing known as LIFE...

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

^^^

faiqa,

thanks for that lovely thought provoking comment.

mother's wishes and blessings for their children. i too believe that stay no matter what.. they exist and colour our lives. of course, it is hard to prove as many really important things are... but yeah i feel that. maybe that always trickled into the way i read and felt ipk.

thanks for a lucid picture of that and about asr khushi's non verbal communication. again, crucial in relationships, na?

and now tells me c'mons what did you find funny.. 😆