Arshi FF- The Destiny part-B updtd-pg4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys this is my first FF on Arshi...(and the first ever FF ON I-F).. hope u guys like it...
guys my exams are approaching so no regular updates till 11th dec... one more thing guys i won't be able to send you pms (sorry if I sound rude)..but till 11th of dec no pms from my side..
one request if i make any grammatical error or any other error for that matter.. please do point it out as it will help me to write better...


so here i go


~~Chapter-1:THE MEETING~~
It had been two weeks since the commencement of college but Khushi had still not been able to make a single friend. She missed her school friends a lot. With sweet memories of her school and tears in her eyes she was walking towards her college,when she saw one of her classmate coming from the other side. She wanted to avoid him as she was not in a mood to talk to anyone and moreover she did not know his name properly. She decided to look down and walk faster so that he is not able to catch her. But alas.. he managed to stop her at the crossroads.
"hi..you are Khushi of Section-C na?? I am Arnav Malik,your classmate" he said in a single breath. Khushi gave a pale smile and exchanged greetings with him.
"So how do you commute daily?", he continued.
"Metro and what about you?", she replied.
"Bus..So see..there are so many advantages of commuting via bus...even you should choose bus over metro".
"Guys like you board the buses is the reason why i avoid the buses" she reverted back.
Arnav was completely taken aback my such reply..a reply which questioned his character... Even Khushi was puzzled what made her pass such a comment. "Oh God..what did I just say..he was trying to be friendly with me... okay..his continuous banter was annoying me...but sill...I shouldn't have made such a remark'.
Khushi was still in her thoughts when they both reached college. Arnav saw his friends are waiting for him in the lawn so he bid goodbye to Khushi and headed towards the lawn.
Just then he turned back and said," I loved the way you pulled my leg." They both burst into the laughter.
"See you in the class" she said.


so guys how was it? do leave your reply. criticism is always welcome but no chappals😆

MY OTHER WORKS-


os- still in your arms
a scene based on barun's movie

~~INDEX~~
CHAPTER 1-The Meeting- pg1
CHAPTER-2 Solace and Care
FINAL UPDATE PART-A
final update Part-B



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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice start please continue soon.
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thank you guys for your appreciation..i will update next on 2nd dec or 3rd dec...but i will try my best to update before that... guys wish me luck for my exams... take care...
Chapter 2- Solace and Care
Arnav entered the class late and looked at Khushi. They both exchanged smile. Khushi wanted to talk to him but her shy nature did not allow her. After the last lecture,she saw him standing alone and so she walked towards him.
"hey..I wanted to talk something about our meeting in the morning...It was actually...I mean..I did not want to... ah..you know...It was just a..."
"Calm down dude...It is okay...I know you did not mean to hurt me...trust me...I am saying this because I can sense that your cursing yourself...you just pulled my leg and I indeed enjoyed it...Wait and watch...you are soon gonna be the prey of my pranks..."he said and laughed.
She smiled and said,"Thanks for forgiving me"
"and yeah..let me tell you one thing that it is not easy to play pranks on me." she smirked.
"Wow..it is gonna be fun then..lets see who wins.." he winked and bid goodbye to her.
A few days passed by and Khushi found a friend in Payal. Khushi and Payal started to interact with Arnav and his friends. They exchanged their contact numbers. That evening,Khushi and her school friends fought and they stopped talking to each other. Khushi was too upset. Later that night Arnav sent her a text on a chat messenger. Khushi told him that she is in a bad mood so she did not want to chat with him.Arnav did not ask her the reason for it but started to send stupid pictures and jokes in order to cheer her up. Initially his antics annoyed her but later she was not able to control her laughter. She replied-"Thanks a lot dude...I am literally rofling right now...you are simply amazing...you are the first person in my life who did not pester me to tell the reason for my bad mood...thanks for respecting my space... and a big big thanks for making me laugh..now it's too late..you should go and sleep...".
Arnav smiled on reading her text. He was proud of his achievement. It was indeed an achievement as it took him two hours to cheer her up...moreover he had even got a scolding from his mother for using his cellphone for so long. He asked Khushi whether she is actually in a happy mood or not because he wanted to be assured of it. On receiving her assurance,he finally retired to his bed.
Khushi was too happy to find a friend like Arnav who was so caring."What an amazing person he is...Unlike others,he was concerned about my happiness than being curious to know the reason of my sadness...Thank you God for sending him in my life.." she thought while lying on her bed. With a big smile on her face,she slept.


~~PROMO~~

"You can't talk to Khushi..as she is not a of our group...I don't like you talking to her...",demanded Dia,Arnav's friend.
"Choose between us or Khushi",ordered Shyam,another friend of Arnav.




Edited by mjhtian94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one.love arnav cheerful tactics.pls continue this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note-
thank you guys for your love and support... feel free to ask me anything regarding this FF... it is not a usual love story... it is something totally different... i hope you won't throw tomatoes at me when this FF reaches its climax...
okay guys...i want to know whether you want small updates like this...at such pace it will take around 25-30 chapters... or you want me to me hurry up and wrap it in 10-12 chapters...????


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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2 is great i like it and promo is nice poor arnav who will he choess between khushi and friend shyam and dia.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys, I am glad that you liked the second update...thank you for your lovely comments...
next update on 2nd or 3rd dec...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys I am back with the update... but guys this is the final update because I have decided to quit IF owing to health issues... I did not want to leave the FF as a cliffhanger so I am telling you the entire plot in a nutshell...

Thank you guys for your love and encouragement... I wish I were able to update in chapters...but I guess I am destined to give the final update after the second chapter itself... Final update is of 2 parts... I will update the second part day after tomorrow...

FINAL UPDATE(Part-A)- THE DESTINY

With passage of time, Arnav and Khushi become friends but they those used to hardly talk in college as they had different friend circle. One day Arnav asked Khushi on chat messenger-"Hey Khushi..We hardly talk in college...from tomorrow we will spend time together in college as well..." to which Khushi replied-"I understand that Arnav..but you know that our friend circle is different...your group won't like that you spend time with me in college..." however Arnav remained adamant and they started to hangout together in college. And then one day,Khushi's fear came true. Arnav's friend started objecting that he should not talk to Khushi in college.

"You can't talk to Khushi..as she is not a part of our group...I don't like you talking to her...",demanded Dia,Arnav's friend.
"Choose between us or Khushi",ordered Shyam,another friend of Arnav.

"If you guys had been my true friends then you would never have raised such objection...I won't leave Khushi..and that's final... Goodbye guys" said Arnav angrily and stomped out.

With passage of time,his friends realized their mistake and begged for apologies. Arnav and Khushi decided to forgive them and start afresh.

Exams were on the door when Arnav told Khushi that he hasn't studied anything. Khushi decides to help him out in studies. Their studytime' used to be filled of fun. They started to know each other better. Khushi realized that she has started to feel for him. But she decides to suppress her feelings as in her opinion she could only his best friend and nothing more than that. Moreover she knew that their respective families would never accept their relationship as they belonged to different religions.

She also decides that she won't tell anything about this to Arnav. Exams went smoothly and both scored 80% in the exams.

Edited by mjhtian94 - 11 years ago
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nice ya..thanks for the pm

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