arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 83

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Janu75 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Isn't it lajwanti running and screaming?
Lajwanti i is friends with Arnav's father and whom is she running away ?

Edited by janu6669 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really cannot get enough of this story
I admire how you are getting started on this - the ultimate betrayal, the deepest secrets, old skeletons
I usually put off reading this story because I want to read it and savour it and then pen down my comments immediately
However real life is very hectic right now and hence the short comment
Fantastic IndiDi
The fear, the reality of uncovering something completely unsavory...are we ready for it? Can we face the truth? And conquer whatever demons of the past there may be?
One has to- in order to move forward..to move on
Cannot wait to read it again and I probably will come back with some more ramblings on this update! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: janu6669

Isn't it law anti running and screaming?

Law anti is friends with Arnav's father and whom is she running away ?



sorry sorry, you meant that as the trick, i understood wrongly? yes yes, it is lajwanti running out of a room tucked at the back of one of the sprawling wings of sheeshmahal, running away from dushyant malik, arnav's father.
Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chitrajay

I really cannot get enough of this story
I admire how you are getting started on this - the ultimate betrayal, the deepest secrets, old skeletons
I usually put off reading this story because I want to read it and savour it and then pen down my comments immediately
However real life is very hectic right now and hence the short comment
Fantastic IndiDi
The fear, the reality of uncovering something completely unsavory...are we ready for it? Can we face the truth? And conquer whatever demons of the past there may be?
One has to- in order to move forward..to move on
Cannot wait to read it again and I probably will come back with some more ramblings on this update! 😊



chitra,

lovely to see you. i know i know this is not an easy one to flip through... i just want to get to the bottom of this sheeshmahal thing, that is where the story of asr khushi is, i felt cheated when that was just glossed over... so much of possibility... but i am no master story teller... just trying to feel my way through it, let's see what comes up.. don't worry about comment and stuff, just read and i hope you enjoy. see ya. life madly hectic with me too. but i insist on clinging to this place hyuk hyuk.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
So Sheesh mahal's mystery is going to be revealed now and painful past with terrible present situation once again going to haunt ASR.But yes he is 28 now not 11 and will surely fix the problem this time once and for all.
Loved the BG it really add more joy and feel while reading the chapter.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi sarah,

yes, it's time for sheeshmahal, and asr is good and ready... i am so glad you liked reading with the music on. kate has put that laughter at the end, gives me goosebumps. i miss ipk every second when i write this story... such a lovely tale, wish they had gone in the right direction. sarah, you guys are watching shadi, somone mentioned the "chay mahine baad" was added later i went back to see... in 190 and 191, it is quite apparent that the six month clause was an afterthought... i am dying to know what the original story was. think we'll ever know? 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

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hi sarah,

yes, it's time for sheeshmahal, and asr is good and ready... i am so glad you liked reading with the music on. kate has put that laughter at the end, gives me goosebumps. i miss ipk every second when i write this story... such a lovely tale, wish they had gone in the right direction. sarah, you guys are watching shadi, somone mentioned the "chay mahine baad" was added later i went back to see... in 190 and 191, it is quite apparent that the six month clause was an afterthought... i am dying to know what the original story was. think we'll ever know? 😳

@bold I mentioned it as it was very prominent there.
Sigh we will never know what was the original story of IPK but you are doing great job by these stories and giving us few answers which were left unanswered.
Yeah he is ready and not giving him even the joy of his gussa 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ha, the joy of his gussa. oh oh oh... no i willl not deprive him entirely, he will kill me then. aayga gussa and the rage of the years building up... only i have no idea where or how.

ah, you said it... yeah, even khushi's voice saying 6 months was added later... i don't think it was sanaya.

just imagine, if it were a real marriage, no 6 month clause, from that night on... ufff the possibilities.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

^^^

ha, the joy of his gussa. oh oh oh... no i willl not deprive him entirely, he will kill me then. aayga gussa and the rage of the years building up... only i have no idea where or how.

ah, you said it... yeah, even khushi's voice saying 6 months was added later... i don't think it was sanaya.

just imagine, if it were a real marriage, no 6 month clause, from that night on... ufff the possibilities.


@bold as story is progressing you are getting naughtier 😉 possibilities ☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
This made me so sad! Does Arnav know about his father and Khushi's mother? If not will he find out in the next chapter? I wonder how Khushi will feel after finding out about her mother's past? I hope both Arnav and Khushi get out of Lucknow safely! You left us at a cliffhanger! Hope you update soon

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