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javeria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Beautiful one shot.

It's just perfect how you took the example of Yamuna river and portrayed it as the life and the wedding of arnav and Khushi. 👏

During the wedding neither arnav nor Khushi spoke, arnav was in hurry to marry Khushi with the excuse that he has to save and secure his dear di life and Khushi to save her sister marriage, but their eyes their jesters were screaming their feelings love and hate. In the end love overcome hate and defeat it and new sweet and happy memories were made which were replaces the bad one.

Love it.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

issk,

the kinks? my very first time with them... you are edicating (not a typo) me thoroughly i say... 🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Beautiful one shot.
It's just perfect how you took the example of Yamuna river and portrayed it as the life and the wedding of arnav and Khushi. 👏
During the wedding neither arnav nor Khushi spoke, arnav was in hurry to marry Khushi with the excuse that he has to save and secure his dear di life and Khushi to save her sister marriage, but their eyes their jesters were screaming their feelings love and hate. In the end love overcome hate and defeat it and new sweet and happy memories were made which were replaces the bad one.
Love it.

thanks, javeria,
so happy you liked. yes, that in pink... we could all see that, their intense silent conversation... and his claiming of her... how he holds her hand just before they walk up to meet the family... always his, always. and he hers... yamuna came along on her own, somehow that sangam kept coming back to me. and the ever changing river, now full, now dry...

special thanks for

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IssK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: indi52
issk,

the kinks? my very first time with them... you are edicating (not a typo) me thoroughly i say... 🤗

Glad to bi helping in edication, madam. Them kinks fabulous items.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
my dear indi, so this is what kept you up to almost 3:30 in the morning! Hah! caught you just as you placed it here! I am so excited to be number one to comment!
our couple had a mixture of emotions at their wedding but those moments of hate were nothing compared to those moments that lead to love. even during the hate he screamed ,"mine, mine" and so did she. loved that. loved how he flew all that way to celebrate with her and to bring her back with him to ny. they couldn't be separated even for a business trip. i love that and sometimes it reminds me of my own love. when john worked in ny and i was in florida i yearend, i pined for him to come home. sometimes he would surprise me and oh was that a beautiful moment! like arnav and khushi's passion when skin needs to feel skin. just beautiful my dear friend. my heart is happy!

cynthia, i saw your res and grinned... i also thought, she's got me. it's 4.37 now, what am i doing. had to go for a shabbat dinner half way through the story... got back at 12.30, the story had to be finished and so...

delighted you like... so much of their lives reminds me of things from my life with my man... the fellow actually looked at barun's picture yesterday as i was fainting and said, "i am better looking than him." not suffering in the confidence department my asr.

even more thrilled you thought of you and john.

tell ya, this story is good for our hearts and spleens.

you liked him and her thinking mine, mine even when they hated? yay. i think in that too there's a bit of all of us.

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.Brooke.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awe indi di its beautiful.The whole scene at the bank of river was brilliant.I am so happy you brought in their first anniversary in this OS.The pain and love both felt at that time beautifully shown by you,mine,mine... .Love each and every detail of it.ArHi in plane going to US,our another unfulfilled wish granted by you 😆

Really enjoyed it.Great start of weekend night 😉

Have a great weekend and thanks for the pm.

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Another story from you! Yay! And there was a time I used to beg you to write one!😭 Remember?😃

Its so dreamy In di! Their first anniversary! Thank you!🤗

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Indi 🤗❤️

Such a beautiful small story

First apologize for late response as wanted some peace of mind to read...

There are some entangling powers and beliefs around us which I said powers...because these are compelling magnetized pulls which just grasp you no matter what.It is a fact and reality, no fantasy...when you are in relation and when you are a mother...these instincts are higher at level

Love how you brought "monsoon" my fav season of all...sundhi sundhi khushboo aur chore pani ka...jaise rim jhim megha geet sunai...I used to take showers and play with my playmates in the rain...can't have enough of it...She is imagining all sorts of pain just by feeling him going away...ehsaas...jo rooh mehsoos karti hai...you brough that song and it is kind a stuck to me since then👏

Adore the scooty and red beetle.❤️..Indi you and your imaginations...but cute one👏

Arnav realizes his hasty decision which was correct yet uske karne ka tareeka ghalat that zamane keh hisaab se...not according to me...is remonding me this scene...as I personally love this scene because this is true image of him for realization just like the time of his realization of Dhak Dhak and these two moments are reflection of each others...both times he is facing his internal reincarnated process through which he sees through his true face and accepts it.VEry few ppl in this world have this ability and he is one of them and as i said before this is one of the reasons among others I adore him...looks are something but true beauty is within and reflects through each action.I don't care if he has anger issues..love him i that too.

She is his and he is hers...you are mine and that's exactly happen when he holds her and tells her marry me...then he holds her to take her to Mandir and she tells her I am yours but why this way when she looks at him before descending the car...He again you are mine and I will make sure of it...he marries with her with her beliefs as he knew she will not live with her like La...He brings her home by holding her hand and she puts bot on him...Yes I do from both sides...now he is facing the world along wit her and indeed he was there for her at every step...You are mine is now for eternity...

Thnx Indi for such a nice OS...❤️

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...
Awe indi di its beautiful.The whole scene at the bank of river was brilliant.I am so happy you brought in their first anniversary in this OS.The pain and love both felt at that time beautifully shown by you,mine,mine... .Love each and every detail of it.ArHi in plane going to US,our another unfulfilled wish granted by you 😆
Really enjoyed it.Great start of weekend night 😉
Have a great weekend and thanks for the pm.

thanks so much, lizzie...

i am now convinced these two characters will drive me mad... 😆

i watched the wedding and kept imagining how he and she must have felt... needed to see how they'd get past this terrible moment... and knew almost instinctively it had to be on the back of that feeling tehey had... the closest expression was "mine, mine." really pyaar has interaction with sahi and galkat, it just exists and it workd in its own way.

have a great weekend. i will update the othe stories. read at leisure... take your time...