arshi os: a monsoon story - Page 4

Originally posted by: shreya09

superb
beautifully written
excellent 🤗

Originally posted by: indi52

smita,

🤗

i was not really conscious of the fact this was the first anniversary of remarriage. story pretty much came rushing at me as on blast from the ast we opened the wedding bells thread.

i absolutely love what you say in pink bold. that si it. what's done cannot be undone... but you can put good tings around it and make the experience less painful... even meaningful. Absolutely!

awww for those tears.

yes, those scenes were concentrated... asr and khsuhi wrote them. It,indeed , seemed like that! indi, just write what we say. if i interfered, he said... yeah... shut up, indi. @ Italics What the..!? I'm sure Khushi must hav told him off when he said that!

and how could khushi not call yamuna "yamuna ji," in her sanka way, and how could she not read the river's communication in the deep khushi way. she always knew he loved her desperately, even when he hated her. Yes,she did. Somewhere in a little corner of her heart she knew that all the nafrat was dikhaava & the mohabbat was hidden deep in some dark alley of his heart. she was such a clever girl, i hate it when she is made to look silly or acchi bahu.

many thanks for reading and your comment.U're welcome! If u dont mind, I hav a request for u. Since the past 4 -5 days my mind has been escaping to Shantivan & Gupta house whenever it gets the chance. I keep thinking of the families' preparations for ArShi first wedding anniversary celebration. What must go on in there? And what about the lovebirds? What r their thoughts on their anniversary? What will b Arnav's gift to Khushi? Will he agree for the family's ho hulla & celebration or will he whisk her off to some secret destination for a romantic holiday?

Will u please do me a favour & write an OS on these lines? Please,please,please...
and that rain... not all things are accidents you know... 😳

Originally posted by: Msserialfan123

when a river runs in full spate its beauty is of another order. no one remembers how dry and barren it had been just a while back, how narrow its spread, how brown and muddy the islands that erupted in its centre even at times, for the lack of its life force, water. perhaps it is these unpretty days of the river that hold up its beauty even better. make us marvel at its surge and strength, its gleaming ripples and sure gait. it seems to know where its going, without there having to be maps and compasses. an instinct carries it along to the right place. a river never gets lost.

beautiful lines, indi! The crux of the arnav khushi equation was that it was truly a meeting and union of two souls which became one, or was it a finding of its lost twin? or its complementary half ? Their relationship was really idealistic and that's why we went crazy... who wouldn't want true love like theirs? Nothing mattered, not snake, not payash not di, nothing really mattered, for arnav it was simply 'khushi is mine' from the time he decided fark kyun padta hai!
Honestly I can't bring myself to watch those painful episodes again, it was tormenting to go through the first time, can never be a glutton for punishment. Vividly remember those scenes, wanting to murder shyam at every glimpse of his twitching face! But then also looked for signs that said the love never really died at that time, it was arnav hurt and wanting to hurt with all the haq of a hurt lover! I remember the glare at Garima after she slapped khushi and the concern when she put on the jewellery for the rasam, or at mami's taunts. Barun and Sanaya were phenomenal in those scenes, really becoming arnav khushi. Despite all the gut wrenching dialogues, i felt those were the glory days of ipk!

Originally posted by: athiraram

its gud...

Originally posted by: RizArshi

If I say its beautiful It will be the understatement of the century. I have no words to express my feelings right now. Its definitely one of your best pieces of writing till date. Initially I felt like going there and put some sense in Khushi. What was she thinking? I don't know from where she generates these untimely lectures which do no good to her. But Arnav is always there to do that job for me and he did this time too. Finally Arnav could take her with him to be together forever. Absolutely loved it. Its simply brilliant. Thanks for the PM :)

Originally posted by: ..Smita..

many thanks for reading and your comment.U're welcome! If u dont mind, I hav a request for u. Since the past 4 -5 days my mind has been escaping to Shantivan & Gupta house whenever it gets the chance. I keep thinking of the families' preparations for ArShi first wedding anniversary celebration. What must go on in there? And what about the lovebirds? What r their thoughts on their anniversary? What will b Arnav's gift to Khushi? Will he agree for the family's ho hulla & celebration or will he whisk her off to some secret destination for a romantic holiday?

Will u please do me a favour & write an OS on these lines? Please,please,please...
and that rain... not all things are accidents you know... 😳