Blast from the Past Thread #17, pg 72, epi 188 - Page 77

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Episodes 187 - 188

Raksha Di ki

A grave ploy got unveiled

A spider's web he laid

With his words everyone he enticed

In his hands Di seemed like a puppet

So much respect given, it never bothered him

Infinite love, never mattered to him

He had worn a mask of goodness

Got perplexed listening to his awful account

Di's good news became his shield

I remained silent, for now he won the round

The shadow of dark clouds began looming around

Felt the bad time was repeating again

I will not let Di's happiness disintegrate

I will not let any sorrow reach Di

I will do anything to protect her

The promise I gave to Di, I will not let it break

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Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episodes 187 - 188

Raksha Di ki

Beparda hua aisi gehri chaal

Bichaya hai usne makdi ka jaal

Lubhata raha sabko baaton se

Kathputli si lagi Di, uske haaton mein

Itni izzat nawazi, usey raas na aayi

Bepanah mohabbat, uske kaam na aayi

Pehen rakha tha usne achhai ka naqab

Hairaan hua sunkar uska ghatiya hisaab

Khush khabar Di ki bani uska dhaal

Khamosh raha main, wo baazi jeeta filhaal

Chaane laga ghane badalon ka saaya

Bura waqt phir se dohraata nazar aaya

Di ke Khushi ko na bikharne doonga

Di tak koi dukh na pahunchne doonga

Karoonga main kuch bhi, unki raksha ke liye

Di ko diya vachan, na tootne doonga

Translation:

A grave ploy got unveiled

A spider's web he laid

With his words everyone he enticed

In his hands Di seemed like a puppet

So much respect given, it never bothered him

Infinite love, never mattered to him

He had worn a mask of goodness

Got perplexed listening to his awful account

Di's good news became his shield

I remained silent, for now he won the round

The shadow of dark clouds began looming around

Felt the bad time was repeating again

I will not let Di's happiness disintegrate

I will not let any sorrow reach Di

I will do anything to protect her

The promise I gave to Di, I will not let it break

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Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episodes 187 - 188

Raksha Di ki

Beparda hua aisi gehri chaal

Bichaya hai usne makdi ka jaal

Lubhata raha sabko baaton se

Kathputli si lagi Di, uske haaton mein

Itni izzat nawazi, usey raas na aayi

Bepanah mohabbat, uske kaam na aayi

Pehen rakha tha usne achhai ka naqab

Hairaan hua sunkar uska ghatiya hisaab

Khush khabar Di ki bani uska dhaal

Khamosh raha main, wo baazi jeeta filhaal

Chaane laga ghane badalon ka saaya

Bura waqt phir se dohraata nazar aaya

Di ke Khushi ko na bikharne doonga

Di tak koi dukh na pahunchne doonga

Karoonga main kuch bhi, unki raksha ke liye

Di ko diya vachan, na tootne doonga

Translation:

A grave ploy got unveiled

A spider's web he laid

With his words everyone he enticed

In his hands Di seemed like a puppet

So much respect given, it never bothered him

Infinite love, never mattered to him

He had worn a mask of goodness

Got perplexed listening to his awful account

Di's good news became his shield

I remained silent, for now he won the round

The shadow of dark clouds began looming around

Felt the bad time was repeating again

I will not let Di's happiness disintegrate

I will not let any sorrow reach Di

I will do anything to protect her

The promise I gave to Di, I will not let it break

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Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episodes 187 - 188

Raksha Di ki

Beparda hui aisi gehri chaal

Bichaya hai usne makdi ka jaal

Lubhata raha sabko baaton se

Kathputli si lagi Di, uske haaton mein

Itni izzat nawazi, usey raas na aayi

Bepanah mohabbat, uske kaam na aayi

Pehen rakha tha usne achhai ka naqab

Hairaan hua sunkar uska ghatiya hisaab

Khush khabar Di ki bani uska dhaal

Khamosh raha main, wo baazi jeeta filhaal

Chaane laga ghane badalon ka saaya

Bura waqt phir se dohraata nazar aaya

Di ke Khushi ko na bikharne doonga

Di tak koi dukh na pahunchne doonga

Karoonga main kuch bhi, unki raksha ke liye

Di ko diya vachan, na tootne doonga

Translation:

A grave ploy got unveiled

A spider's web he laid

With his words everyone he enticed

In his hands Di seemed like a puppet

So much respect given, it never bothered him

Infinite love, never mattered to him

He had worn a mask of goodness

Got perplexed listening to his awful account

Di's good news became his shield

I remained silent, for now he won the round

The shadow of dark clouds began looming around

Felt the bad time was repeating again

I will not let Di's happiness disintegrate

I will not let any sorrow reach Di

I will do anything to protect her

The promise I gave to Di, I will not let it break

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Originally posted by: Horizon

Indi,

You are a possessed editor here.. all edits spectacular.

I was saving to read these, as honestly I was enjoying the love track on the reruns and couldn't get ready for this heart break.. but now its time.. I have to face it..

Beautiful very perspective take. agree with you on all the four counts. I always felt asr's pain at both levels equally , at loosing his love and at betrayal of a some one he trusted over the years.. having been brought up in a culture, family where BIL's are the big brothers almost father figures like .. your description of how this man must have felt hearing name of his beloved from his BIL in a fit of maniac obsession was very touching. .. it almost felt the purity of Khushi and their love was despicably stripped.. it must have been terribly hurting, ground breaking under his feet.

and in an instant the focus was only Di.. as it should .. she is already in this quagmire and in a desperate need to be pulled..

Abs agree about the connection between Payash love confession and the touching terse convo of these two under the stars months ago.. why this love story will remain a classic..

He would have perhaps at the least shouted at Khushi if Di didn't appear that min.. but wonder theer wouldn't have been any change even if he talked to her.. what are the odds of he believing in everything she would say... it comes easy for a cynic to fall back into his pessimism ..nevertheless his decision to marry her would have been same to keep her unavailable to Shyam.. ofcourse Khushi would have known why he married her.. may be her trials to prove her innocence would have started 3 months early.. not much different anyway..ofcourse Khushi's right to information would have been addressed.

That upfront asr in the room with his Di..perhaps muted that minute the news came out.

Thoroughly enjoyed Indi. Thank you.

Originally posted by: Horizon

Emphatic write up Indi. You are abs right about choice of words for tum mama bane wale ho.. and his sense of responsibility.

That big res underlined said all.. his heart that surged ahead lately is usurped and his head took over that moment.. what needs to be done..

And yes that sense of right and wrong and the effects of protecting right was all lost in the end.. for once, his actions did reflect, justified a man deeply hurt, raged yet had to raise to the occasssion to protect in that heat of the moment.. asr was never shown to be supernatural, divine.. he is all the very human.. encumbered by all humanly emotions.. he could be right in his own place for his rage, misjudgment for that moment .. but not his NOT reflecting later on it when Khushi was living with him in the same room..the asr I knew would have been torn between right and wrong..

That dark night and a mechanical vehicle rendered the warm lap he desperately needed that moment.. the reticent gardener at home, he had to get away from there turns to another mute mate.. these nature elements are indeed much more profound and perhaps can be more conciliatory to embrace all one's melancholy ..poetic justice indeed..

Engaging ramble on he seeking Ma's support and mother earth..

the lines I always remember for his pain..

Bana bhi na tha

jal gaya aashiyaana

kahan ab mohabbat ke maare rahenge..

(Hemanth da's "na ye chaand hoga")

thanks indi.

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Episodes 187 - 188

Raksha Di ki

Beparda hui aisi gehri chaal

Bichaya hai usne makdi ka jaal

Lubhata raha sabko baaton se

Kathputli si lagi Di, uske haaton mein

Itni izzat nawazi, usey raas na aayi

Bepanah mohabbat, uske kaam na aayi

Pehen rakha tha usne achhai ka naqab

Hairaan hua sunkar uska ghatiya hisaab

Khush khabar Di ki bani uska dhaal

Khamosh raha main, wo baazi jeeta filhaal

Chaane laga ghane badalon ka saaya

Bura waqt phir se dohraata nazar aaya

Di ke Khushi ko na bikharne doonga

Di tak koi dukh na pahunchne doonga

Karoonga main kuch bhi, unki raksha ke liye

Di ko diya vachan, na tootne doonga

Translation:

A grave ploy got unveiled

A spider's web he laid

With his words everyone he enticed

In his hands Di seemed like a puppet

So much respect given, it never bothered him

Infinite love, never mattered to him

He had worn a mask of goodness

Got perplexed listening to his awful account

Di's good news became his shield

I remained silent, for now he won the round

The shadow of dark clouds began looming around

Felt the bad time was repeating again

I will not let Di's happiness disintegrate

I will not let any sorrow reach Di

I will do anything to protect her

The promise I gave to Di, I will not let it break

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Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episodes 185 - 186

Dhoka

Dhund mein main kho gaya

Geet tha wo so gaya

Tham gayi dil ki dhadkanein

Sirf dhoka reh gaya

Jiski har baat maine maana tha

Jise Di ne hamesha pooja tha

Saamne aaya uska asli chehra

Insaan ke shakal mein tha wo bhediya

Masoom si thi jiski hasee

Mere dil ke taaron ko choo gayi

Tooti taaren, toota dil mera

Uss haseena ne bhi dhoka diya

Bhaari kadam, bhaari saansein meri

Na raah, na manzil nazar aaye kahin

Awaaz hai goonjti har taraf yehi

Sab dhoka hi tha, aur kuch bhi nahin

Translation:

I got lost into the mist

The song that was went to sleep

The heart beats halted

Only betrayal remained

The one whose every word I heeded

The one whom Di worshipped

His real face came forth

In the guise of a human, he was a wolf

The one whose smile was innocent

Who touched the strings of my heart

The strings broke, my heart broke

That pretty girl too betrayed

Heavy are my steps, heavy is my breath

I can see neither the path nor the destination

Just this sound echoes around

It was all a betrayal, nothing else

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