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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

^^^

jalebi girl,

thanks and good to see you.😳

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..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

That was so cute

Only Khushi can comfort him

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

^^^

anita

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thanks and v good to see you. just read a couple of your takes, was fun 😳.

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Jay

@Sharaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Wonderful OS indi. One more os!! So sweet of u... Our Arshi always soothes each other, watever hurdles may be. Their inner demons ,insecurities always lay in their hearts. I loved how u portray our MAN in suv in isolated road.. Screaming maa... My heart goes to Arnav Malik... And,there my angel Khushi soothes... Love her reply to her Arnavji. Arnav & Khushi hamesha... Waiting for more os frm u. May be cheesy,mushy.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

@ Indi

I shouldn't have done this. Went thru a quick read. Now I realise I should have read this at leisure.

Break of day, written in the night 😆, my first thought when I read the pm. As I was reading about Arnav flying away on the roads in his car, me and my detective mind, was trying to figure out at which point in the story this was taking place. I did find out eventually, dumbo me. I should have known, after all that's where you've been in your stories. A very highly emotional one this. I want to read it again. So, I've decided this needs a second round, will come back tomorrow to give my vishesh tippani. 😉 And, I see some red on the thread too, got to catch that one also.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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^^^

durga,

looking forward to vishesh tippani. red was here and most helpful. some day my obsession with all of this shall wane... i'll go back to my expected life i guess, but before that let me work out my mad desire to fell, to search, to write. thanks for indulging this always. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

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gauri, thank you. 😳

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Cadence_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

got time only now to read this indi di. sensitive, insightful and beautifully written. alas, they never explored arnav's love for his dad and his fears regarding him. how much more there was to this character they created, how much more deeper it could have got...you have but given a glimpse. the creators though were blind to their own creation's beauty.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hi rashmi,

thanks for reading. i couldn't agree more about the creators not really caring about the character beyond a stage. having by part design and part magic a huge and shaded character, how come they were not itching to find him more? his relationship with his father that was important, how would anyone feel if such a thing happened, and here we have a sensitive soul. glad you liked the delve. enjoyed your pm on 162, shall reply tomorrow.

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

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it's absolutely wonderful.

Arnav's inner turmoil, his turbulence, and his contrition, all you depicted so brilliantly, that made me spell bound.You really can decipher the character of ASR.

Arnav is like a ocean, ocean of intricate feelings, abysmal emotions.His life, his past is so distraught that never let him live in peace. Khushi came to his life, she completed him.But again the remorse, what suffused his life. The misunderstanding what made him brutal to the girl, whom he loved enormously.But she is an forgiving angel, who understands her Arnavji so well. Or moreover her love is myriad for him and so as his. she knows how to pacify him when he is vulnerable.

i can feel, how much you are missing them, same here Indi. ASR and Khushi will dominate our heart for the rest of our life I guess. they are really so empowering!

the pala part cracked me up. Arnav is also adapting his jhalli wife's crazy antics

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