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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: indi52


thank you for that fabulous comment, smita. U're welcome!

if there were a person like asr he would never ever be quite free of all that that night meant to him. yes he would try and resolve it the best he could, and the entry of a woman he could love and trust who loved and trusted him to would help in the healing and resolution... but there would always be in him somewhere that little 14 year old who heard a gun shot or two and his life was flipped out of control. So true! Unpleasant experiences happen with everybody. We all look past them,ignore them,move on with r lives,etc,etc but when their memories come back to haunt us,we cant escape them.

the darkness lingers and some days it just won't let you be.

what you say about loving his dad and the trust breaking is 100 percent true. this was never entered into. chances are his dad was also a great fun sort of father... and in a patriarchal set up, asr the only son was made much of bet. and for all of us in general, father is a huge place of trust. utter trust by a child... that got shattered. sad na? Ya,very sad. Can u imagine losing ur parents,ur house,ur childhood,all on the same day? Horrible,terrible,no words will suffice to describe what Anjali & Arnav must've felt that day.

thanks so much for saying what you do about the writing, i am thrilled and grateful. i should be sorry that i made you cry, but i am happy... terrible, aren't i?Of course not! U're adorable! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Oh my - what can I Say?
This was beauuutiful 👏
I loved how you showed an ASR still haunted by the past- hopefully this doesn't happen too often now
In real life, it would never have been easy to get past burdens and the feelings the young ASR went through losing both parents!
Loved that bit - he'd loved his father too - so his betrayal would have been all the harder for him...sigh!!! I always thought I understood ASR - his toughness, his anger and often inexcusable behavior - of course, a lot of credit must go to the creative team and to the actor playing the character - to make us like a grey protagonist.
His gratitude that he has his crazy wife in his life - his wonder at her innocence - somewhat untouched by the cruel world - he needs her to live.
Loved the description of that last scene - by the poolside
And of course, the word "paala" - learnt Hindi words that I never knew of thanks to IPK
😆
Thank you for this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
^^^

chitra, 😃

thank you for your words. he was quite something else, wasn't he? the writers wrote with their mind and heart then barun gave him epic contours with his completely giving portrayal... all of himself went into creating asr. it is astounding how a hindi serial character beckons an old bong woman who never watches serials to write about him, his love, his woman, his life. some day i will stop writing this stuff, most people think i am mad anyway for spending hours over something called fan fiction. but even when it's over i'll know this ipk and asr gave me something timeless... changed my life in many ways.

thank you for reading all my madness.
indi52 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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^^^

thank you, zayana... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb 👏
Lovely and beautiful
indi52 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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^^^

javeria,

thank you so so much. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Indi, You have put it so beautifully ASR's piercing pain, raw and his pent up emotions. When he fell in love with Kushi, he became changed. But time to time his insecurities and fear show up. He does not want to be like his father whom he once adored. It brought tears to my eyes. His FB by the poolside and his journey through the night...WOW!!
The scene between arshi...his pain and her understanding...beautifully put! Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
sigrid 😳

thank you for reading, liking, commenting. yeah, long held fears and inclinations take tine to go... this fear will haunt him always, just that he'll feel it less and less... but from time to time it will be stirred and rise up. or so i thought.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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aisha,

thank you...
😳
indi52 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tapdance,

i see you've gone through many of my stories. thank you so much.

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