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Posted: 12 years ago
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Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.
IPK and Arnav-Khushi love has been making us do some silly, crazy things all the time. This time it has made me write a poem in Telugu, once again. Because, writing one in Telugu is the craziest thing I've been attempting at in the forum. This is my third one. This one is in Telugu because I'm following the storyline going on in IPK Telugu version.
Scene: The first para is about the poolside hug post kidnapping. The second one is about the moments Arnav and Khushi spend on the steps. Both scenes are conversations in silence.
Maunam
Maatala to nindi undi ee vinta maunam
Evvariki vinipinchani ye okka sabdam
Virahamey manasulani kalapaga
Kanneeru kaarenu badhaga
Mitimeerenu gundelalo sahanam
Kaugillalo karigene manasuloni dukham
Manasu alisipoye, dehamu alisipoye
Chinta chenta cheraga, nidura dooramaiyye
Cheytilo cheytini kalapaga
Baadhanu iddaru panchaga
Mundundi abaddhala vala to samaram
Edurinchutaku dhrudamainadi ee bandham
Translation:
Full of words is this strange silence
No one can hear a single word
Separation has made the hearts unite
The tears roll down with sadness
Patience in the heart has crossed limits
The heart's sorrow melts in the embrace
The mind is tired, the body is tired
Worry inches closer, sleep goes away
With the hand in the other's hand
Sharing the sorrow with each other
A battle ahead with the net of lies
To face that, this relationship has strengthened
My earlier Telugu poems:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I absolutely loved it. Good work!!
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Chala bagundi. Loved it 👏
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Naaku bagha nachindi... (sorry abt my telugu)
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good...👏👏!!!
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i loved the second stanza more... 👏👏

its Beautifully written ⭐️

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wow akka its awsome
u r a poet trulyyy
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akshusarun, Arshidiehardfan, rrams, mayukatta, supriya.arshi, Prasanthi, Srilathalolla, Arshig8, Thank you all for the likes and lovely comments. 😊
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Originally posted by: Arshidiehardfan

Naaku bagha nachindi... (sorry abt my telugu)

ArshiD, paravaa illiye, Telungule nanna daan ezhudu vandadu. 😳 Thanks. 😊
Edited by DurgaS - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: supriya.arshi

i loved the second stanza more... 👏👏

its Beautifully written ⭐️

Thanks Supriya. 😃 The second one was little tough to write. Couldn't get the lines easily. It was such a difficult and touching moment at the same time.

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