Arshi Telugu poem - Maunam

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divsarunfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

chala chala bagundi akka👏.meru bale rastaru😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sohara
very thoughtful.
i don't understand telegu, so i read the eglish translation.

and i absolutely loved it.

Thank you so much for reading Sohara. I am glad you liked the English version. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: indi52
love the idea and the english version. the first stanza especially has a strength and beauty. so many of their conversations are without the uttered word. in fact, all that they really say to each other, often happens in that invisible layer, of late have been noticing the rabba ve pauses even more... so so much said. just yesterday, the rangoli dance while entering gh had me gawking and wanting more.

thanks, durga, wish i knew telegu.

Thanks Indi. 😃 I agree, those long rabba ve pauses, so much is said during those eye-locks. I remember the first time I saw the rabba ve towards the end of epi 153, I found it too stretched, but now as we've learnt reading those unspoken words, we do feel it could have been longer. The rangoli dance rabba ve, so many thoughts about it. A sense of dropping of guard. Will write more when we reach there.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Really nice Durgy...Very touchy

Thank you so much, Arshi. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: divsarunfan
chala chala bagundi akka👏.meru bale rastaru😊

Hi Div. Chala chala thanks. 😊

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Arshidiehardfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: DurgaS

ArshiD, paravaa illiye, Telungule nanna daan ezhudu vandadu. 😳 Thanks. 😊

😊Thanks nakku konchem konchem telugu telusu... nenu telugu movies choosi nerchkunnanu...(difficult...) Ur tamil is also good😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arshidiehardfan

😊Thanks nakku konchem konchem telugu telusu... nenu telugu movies choosi nerchkunnanu...(difficult...) Ur tamil is also good😊

😆 Thanks ArshiD, movies have been influential in improving our languages.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: basb
awesome 👏

Thanks Divya. 😊

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: M1A1
awesome⭐️

Thank you for appreciating all my 3 Telugu poems. 😊

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Horizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Thank you so much, Horizon. When the thought came to write something about this, I knew it was not going to be easy. I actually backed out of the idea several times, even while writing it. Somehow managed to complete it. These scenes are like the rarest of rare gems of IPK, worth watching again and again.

You know a few words/ expressions come out good in a few languages. Like I love the word "Maunam" in telugu such an apt word you chose as theme here (I wrote some thing similar that time after the epi, not in Telugu tho), there are a few that sound good in Hindi, some in Urdu.. like Khamoshi even sannata sounds so good in Hindi but their counterparts of vernacular Telugu not as much, and there are many in Urdu!

I can understand your ambiguity in attempting this one becos of the depth of the scenes (the very reason that keeps me away from writing as anything less wouldn't satisfy me!) but you are a writer after all and it did come out very well. I am glad you finally decided to write.

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