arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: zariya123
awesome

thank you, zariya. 😃

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: anonyasr
Wow. Lovely story. Beautifully written.

thanks so much, anonyasr,
and thanks for finding it and reading, lovely to see new readers always.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: khushiforever
Omg did he really wake up or was she just imagining?I hope she wasn't imagining and it's all real.Plz continue soon!

hi khushiforever,

lovely name. good to see you. and ahem well, ok... he really did wake up. will update this week and let you know. 😃

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...
Beautiful chapter.

Loved every detail of ASR features.

Looking forward for the next update soon .

Thanks for the pm.

hi lizzie,

thanks so much. glad you liked. hope you're happy he's opened his eyes. 😳. will update soon this time. see ya.

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Iqra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: indi52
^^^ livecrazily,

love your name. wish i could do that because that is what i want to do. welcome to without you. grateful you liked it. i am a first time fiction writer... just want to tell a story, hope it falls into place. always wonderful to see a new reader. i am so glad you like the feel of it all. hoping to update today. will let you know.

thanks indi...

i really like the flow of this story

BTW iqra here and i comment on chapter later

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Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Awsumm ff beautiflly written just found it n read all parts together

Loved it

Continue soon

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

thanks, yashal_khan

so glad you found without you. welcome to my first fan fiction. happy you enjoyed. see you soon, will pm you when i update.😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

she hadn't seen his eyes for so so long.

I couldn't imagine this for Kushi not to be able to see those beautiful chocolate eyes. Not to be able to have her questions answered, to be alone even though his body is there in front of her. She couldn't feel his touch, she could only touch. She couldn't hear his words, she could only speak, never knowing if he heard her words. The frustration she must be feeling, the loneliness, the memories of a passionate love. Memories that make her blush.

To be honest I was getting a little frustrated because I know the longer he is in the coma the worse it is for him. Recovery would take too long but I guess that is the nurse in me and not the romantic.

I am very happy that our loverboy is waking and you listened to your hubbie and daughter!

Just beautiful and thank you for sharing this beautiful story.