arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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Cadence_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

can i go all yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the last line did it for me *dances*. indi di, till now, i had understood that you understand ASR perfectly, how perfectly such a deliciously imperfect man can be understood. But with this wonderful monologue of Khushi's you have made it clear that you know her so well!!!

this is such a beautiful story indi di. thank you for writing! 🤗 and oh loved loved the Eden allusion.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

^^^ rashmi,

i often have this mad desire to call you mashira... another world in it somewhere. eden 😳 oh i smiled when i read that. hadn't thought of it consciously... but we all have one in us i guess, no matter what culture or faith... somewhere far away is a place that exists outside the narrow limits of length breadth height humanly measured and sized and claustrophobically sealed... and that is inevitably a place in nature, hill, mountain, rill river ocean sky space everything may it hold, even a desert, but it is for us our garden. i actually have one in me somewhere and crazy lovely things happen there. maybe that sneaked into asr's story merrily.

thank you for that compliment on khsuhi. she is a gitrl i fell for way back... and despite all the messed up writing and the changed smile of khushi, i continue to have thsi thing for her. the asr in me i guess... 😆

thanks so much for reading and that fab comment.

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lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Beautiful update! Many thanks for the pm.

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Cadence_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: indi52
^^^ rashmi,

i often have this mad desire to call you mashira... another world in it somewhere. eden 😳 oh i smiled when i read that. hadn't thought of it consciously... but we all have one in us i guess, no matter what culture or faith... somewhere far away is a place that exists outside the narrow limits of length breadth height humanly measured and sized and claustrophobically sealed... and that is inevitably a place in nature, hill, mountain, rill river ocean sky space everything may it hold, even a desert, but it is for us our garden. i actually have one in me somewhere and crazy lovely things happen there. maybe that sneaked into asr's story merrily.

thank you for that compliment on khsuhi. she is a gitrl i fell for way back... and despite all the messed up writing and the changed smile of khushi, i continue to have thsi thing for her. the asr in me i guess... 😆

thanks so much for reading and that fab comment.

i also have this mad urge to call myself mashira sometimes. 😆😆 you are most welcome to indi di. you are so right about the changed smile...something not so pleasant happened in IPK's writing and Khushi's delineation that perhaps affected Sanaya's interpretation as well. the smile became more knowing which is tragic really. it struck me most during the ASR birthday disaster episode. well, we have those gardens to banish all unwanted smiles and imagine what we want, dont we. as long as that is there, nothing can hold us back and i am rambling.

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anonyasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Wow. Lovely story. Beautifully written.

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Meera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Omg did he really wake up or was she just imagining?I hope she wasn't imagining and it's all real.Plz continue soon!

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.Brooke.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Beautiful chapter.

Loved every detail of ASR features.

Looking forward for the next update soon .

Thanks for the pm.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: mandy15
fabulous update dear :)

thanks so much, mandy, glad you liked. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: lakraj80
Beautiful update! Many thanks for the pm.

hi lakraj,

glad you liked and thanks always for reading. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mashira

i also have this mad urge to call myself mashira sometimes. 😆😆 you are most welcome to indi di. you are so right about the changed smile...something not so pleasant happened in IPK's writing and Khushi's delineation that perhaps affected Sanaya's interpretation as well. the smile became more knowing which is tragic really. it struck me most during the ASR birthday disaster episode. well, we have those gardens to banish all unwanted smiles and imagine what we want, dont we. as long as that is there, nothing can hold us back and i am rambling.

thanks, mashira 😆. and yes we have our gardens... and our fan fiction to make it all magical and did i tell you i love ramblers, they belong to my land?😆 see ya soon.