arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Reswa😳

Unreswa

Okay Indi, I am taking deep breaths as i write this! I read the last line of chapter 2 first! ASR was showing signs of improvement!😃 Khushi placed his hand on her heart! He will recover now am sure! Won't he? Had too much of hospitals and doctors in real life this summer, so...was delighted to jump into the cold water of the pool with Arshi! Love the way the story is developing! Is Arnav going to beat up the gundaas who locked up Khushi? He is already feeling so protective towards her.

I hope you are taking compliments today because this update was unbelievable!

Edited by wiwy - 12 years ago

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

^^^ compliments? aane do aane do aane do.

wiwy, thanks a tonne for reading. will he come back? think i know? i just jumped into a story without thought and said, okay let's see what happens if we go all the way to death... he is still fighting for life... yet in my head he is saving khushi... conphusiya my. need a dose of hello hi and bye bye. 😆

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

why I always become out of words reading this story...cant decide what to say...
loved the update...his vital signs are steady and strong...that mean Arnav ko kuch nahin hoga,hai na????
and new twist..was it really an accident or something else...
cant wait for the next update...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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supriya

@supriya.arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Indi...WoW wat a tale...i mean seriously swimming pool...so hot nd romantic at the same time 😳

you give me a heart attack...during the present situation...seein Khushi so vulnerable nd blank state of mind...i hav to keep remindin myself to read further...i'll be stuck at tht point readin Khushi's state... its perfectly explained ⭐️👏

di nd Khushi's bondin...you just showed in one shot...superb 👏

so thts how Arnav-Khushi met...in a pool...the most excitin start...though thank god Khushi dived straight into her protector😃 from those disgustin ppl 😡

Arnav's protective senses...nd Khushi too could feel...its just love from the start ❤️
please continue the past story straight from wher you left of...its very interestin 😊

nd Arnav is stable 😃 thts a relief...nd loved the part wher she kept his hand on her heart...only a Arshi fan will get the true feelin of it...❤️

Lovely⭐️ update...agn Amazin writin ⭐️ the banner edit too good 👏

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
why I always become out of words reading this story...cant decide what to say...
loved the update...his vital signs are steady and strong...that mean Arnav ko kuch nahin hoga,hai na????
and new twist..was it really an accident or something else...
cant wait for the next update...

hi nishu shorna,

hope you enjoyed. his vital signs returned to normal twice that day. yes, looks kinda good. can't decide what to say... mmm hope that's not a bad thing.

yeah, how come there was a bus off the main road that afternoon? glad you liked the twist.

hope to update next week.

thanks again for reading, always a pleasure.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi
Indi...WoW wat a tale...i mean seriously swimming pool...so hot nd romantic at the same time 😳

you give me a heart attack...during the present situation...seein Khushi so vulnerable nd blank state of mind...i hav to keep remindin myself to read further...i'll be stuck at tht point readin Khushi's state... its perfectly explained ⭐️👏

di nd Khushi's bondin...you just showed in one shot...superb 👏

so thts how Arnav-Khushi met...in a pool...the most excitin start...though thank god Khushi dived straight into her protector😃 from those disgustin ppl 😡

Arnav's protective senses...nd Khushi too could feel...its just love from the start ❤️
please continue the past story straight from wher you left of...its very interestin 😊

nd Arnav is stable 😃 thts a relief...nd loved the part wher she kept his hand on her heart...only a Arshi fan will get the true feelin of it...❤️

Lovely⭐️ update...agn Amazin writin ⭐️ the banner edit too good 👏

thanks so much, supriya... tell me honestly, was the pool bit "hot." really i can't make out. when i read others i can, when i read my own words i am to familiar with them or whatever but they don't move me at all.

sorry to give ya heart attack. thing is, it is a serious turn in life... the sort we all hope we never have to face, but there it is... we can avoid it in our stories and pretend only good things happen or we can be cussed as i am being and find out if there's any magic lying hidden in that too. en route there will be some tough moments, but we'll get there, na?

yes, twice today, his vital signs were stable.

i will certainly try and do as you say and tell their story from that meeting onward... hopefully it will come to me. 😳

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coolbakes_Jalad

@Lifeistooshort

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

loved the story to bits!! but gotta rush coz i really have patients waiting... it was beautifully written!!! cant wai tfor more!!

each description was so perfect and feelings expressed grief and joy at the respective times perfectly!!!

cant wait to read more!!

and the last paragraph.. are you serious you have such a big daughter!!!! that made my day!! loved ur story😳

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

^^^ hi coolbakes,

thanks, and tell me, are you a doc? really?

gah, if i have glaring errors in my tale, please do do let me know. so happy you read though in tearing rush. see ya soon. and yes that 12 year old prim one is mine.

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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

😃 arnav is alive..phew!...

indi di loved it..👏..specially flashback of khushi..their first meet...it was funny with khushi on top of arnav😆..but i really liked the way you described that moment...then in hospital.. khushi's feelings ..her holding arnav's hand...i loved it..

waiting for more di...

and also loved reading your daughter's reaction 😆

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

👏👏👏 way to go Indi ,What a start...for rocking me at the edge first.

Love the meeting style in their eternal heaven[pool side]

Possessiveness and protectiveness from the beginning just like first epi right in his arms...fabulous⭐️

Khushi's fears and fighting back mode finding him like that and thinking positive ...too good.must say "hand Sanitizer" touch is mind blowing⭐️⭐️⭐️ explains and connects so many angles...at that moment you can think and can take this any where if you are at Khushi's place

Again spending too much time in hospital with Mom was not a good experience and brought a lot in my mind...

Take a bow..love it❤️

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago