Khushi's OS: If Only - Page 6

Aww poor khushi only left with if onlys

This is such a beautiful and touching story. I am usually a stickler for happy endings, but I still loved it. The list of If onlys at the end was especially very beautifully written.

It's a nice piece maybe you can continue and write some more parts 😊

Heartbreaking ...I am amazed at your writing abilities...seriously, I realise it is fiction but it did not feel like it...aah the humiliation and the anguish she felt...I loved how she remembered the reverse situation but the contrast between the two occasions start and beautifully portrayed!

You really pulled my heartstrings with this.

Beautifully written 👏 Thou it is an emotional OS... loved it

That was written beautifully, u are so talented!

Khushi... She has always been true to her name . Spreading happiness even when she had been facing the worst life could give her . Solving all the problems in others life when she was caught up in the worst mess in her life . The sacrificial , tortured lamb ..

If Only ... It will always haunt lives . If only that had happened and not this .. If only, shall always a dream which is impossible to experience in reality... But if the ' if only ' did not happen means that it was not meant to happen and as they say ' whatever happens , happens for the good ' .that's why there's always hope for the good to happen...

Beautiful OS

What an emotional story. The way Arnav treated Khushi like a waiter pierced my heart. Her depression when she thought about 'If Only's was heartbreaking.