OS: Eyes Like A Shutter Final Part Pg 7 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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love the two parts, so beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello! Thanks for the pm & sorry for the late comment as I wanted to take the time to write a proper one. Dal, I read the OS again but with the music on this time and it got me all emotional again. My heart swelled up with joy and I was left with slightly misty eyes by the time I finished reading both the parts. You my friend clearly succeeded in your mission to make your readers feel the emotions that you penned down. Needless to say, this is one of my fav OS of yours & I absolutely loved it.

This heartwarming story, message and the choice of music were pure & blissfully beautiful. When I first read the OS, I somehow felt that it was incomplete, that a closure needed to be given. I'm so elated that you wrote a second part, it feels complete now so thank you. I have not got the opportunity to read all your works yet however I truly do feel that this is one of your best works from what I have read so far. You are a talented young lady and I wish you all the best for your future writing ventures. Happy New Year! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shalu87

Hello! Thanks for the pm & sorry for the late comment as I wanted to take the time to wrote a proper one. Dal, I read the OS again but with the music on this time and it got me all emotional again. My heart swelled up with joy and I was left with slightly misty eyes by the time I finished reading both the parts. You my friend clearly succeeded in your mission to make your readers feel the emotions that you penned down. Needless to say, this is one of my fav OS of yours & I absolutely loved it.

This heartwarming story, message and the choice of music were pure & blissfully beautiful. When I first read the OS, I somehow felt that it was incomplete, that a closure needed to be given. I'm was so elated that you wrote second part, it feels complete now, thank you. I have not got the opportunity to read all your works yet however I truly do feel that this is one of your best works from what I have read so far. You are a talented young lady and I wish you all the best for your future writing ventures. Happy New Year! :)


Thank you so much for this wonderful comment! :) I personally was hoping many would listen to the song. I always add a song because those emotions that flow through the song, plays a huge role in the writing as well. So I am glad you did. :) And Happy New Year's to you too! Hope to see you in my other works too. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was very and truly a beautiful os I had a feeling Khushi was blind as I continue reading.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was absolutely beautiful.
I've only just caught up with my PMs and I am so so glad that I was able to read this.
Wonderful. Emotive. Heart-wrenchingly beautiful.
That's all I can say.
Lots of love
Celiza xox
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
wonderful😛...yoshi,u r amazing!!!!
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