OS: Eyes Like A Shutter Final Part Pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
heart touching...
that wzz lovely and the concept, positivity towards life potrayed is so well ...🤗
plzzz pm me your further updates😊
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#32
This was touching, different and so beautiful... 😊
Merry X-mas😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

the way she asked arnav to describe her eyes i have a doubt about her blindness

anyway as usual u always stun me...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
this one was so pure and angelic!! a perfect christmas shot... thank you for sharing :)
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deep thinker haan ? ...lovely and serene ...
thanks for the good wishes and season's greetings to you too dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
OMG! That was awesome 👍🏼
You know what, Again I read it from the first after got to know that Khushi is blind 😳
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woah! i was breathtaking!
please continue...pretty please?
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#38
simply beautiful man
awww so she was blind toh kya hua she cant still see without seeing
man he was observing her for so long
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#39
Beautifully written and this is very different
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Something About December


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'You can't just walk away like that, 'he held her hand firmly, but gently pulling her petite body to him. She struggled, trying to pry off his hands away from her body.

'Why not!,' she asked in frustration.

He leaned forward, hot air brushing her face from the warmth of his breath. Her red stained lips throbbed from fear, and new found emotions.

'Arnav? Arnav where are you?,' he heard her yelling across the hallway. Sweet sounds of anklets traveled to his ears, making him smile.

'I am here darling,' he called out to her, whilst he walked to the door, reaching out to her. She stretched her hands to grab his shirt, and pull him closer. His arms wrapped across her waist, and guided her inside the room.

'Were you reading our book again?,' she asked him quietly, snuggling in to his warmth.

'You always know,' he whispered back, his arms firmly holding her. A bright smile spread across her face at his comment. Her contagious smile, made him smile wide at the immense joy they both felt.

'I always know Arnav,' she whispered, whilst she toyed with his soft sweater. Her gentle fingers glided up and down, like she always did when she was very comfortable.

'It's been 2 years. Can you believe it?,' he said, stroking her soft cheeks with his fingers. She sighed contently and nodded.

'It is not difficult to believe. When there is faith involved anything is impossible,' she said laying her head on his shoulder. He smiled at her reply. Nothing has changed- she was still the same woman with precious life treasured inside of her.

'But us... Did you ever think..?,' he asked her again.

'I knew from the moment I sensed your presence. The moment I felt your eyes watching me every year.'

'But why did you run away from me that day?,'

Her brown orbs closed, 'faith can sometimes be tested by fear. I felt the strength of your love that day, and I became afraid. But my father in heaven used you as a weapon to fight off my fear.'

His soft lips gently laid a kiss on her cheeks.

'And he blessed us with another beauty,' he said laying his hand on her stomach. She captured his hands with her own, and grasped it.

'The symbol of our love,' she whispered, a tear dropping from her eye.

He hugged her tightly.

They held each other for a while, until Arnav's eyes saw the time.

He pulled away from her stood her up.

'It's 11:30 Khushi, time to go.'

She nodded, and they held each other's hands, walking out to the park.

'Because,' he whispered, deeply gazing in to her eyes. Leaning forward he captured her cold, red stained lips in to a deep kiss. A gasp escaped from her mouth, but it was silenced, as their new found love reunited for the first time.

They laid on their usual spot, holding each other's hands, watching the dark, star filled skies. Arnav turned towards Khushi and brushed her dark hair aside.

'Does it bother you that you don't know how I look like?,' he asked her.

She smiled, 'no because I have seen your heart, and that is enough.'

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OR2LXXIX8ro[/YOUTUBE]

***

Hello there dear lovely readers,

Honestly I never expected to write another part for this, but I was listening to this beautiful song, underneath the Christmas tree, and this scene flashed in to my mind. Writing this made me cry, and smile. Many memories were thought as I wrote this short part. I hope you all feel the same emotions as you read this, as I felt as i wrote this.

If you guys have the time listen to this beautiful song too. Beautiful beyond words.

To the commentors: Many of you said I always convey a message in my stories, and some said I make them feel. I cried reading those comments because that is what my aim is in writing. I want to inspire, and teach lessons in my stories. Love is a journey of life lessons, and I like to portray them in my stories. Knowing that it helps some people makes my heart dance with joy. So thank you from the bottom of my heart, and I love all of my beautiful readers. Hope this short part made you guys feel again too. :)

Love to all, and God Bless,

-Dal, Muthu or Yoshi


Edited by Dalmuthuya - 12 years ago

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