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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Hey!

Wow! Beautiful. Perhaps better or equally as breath taking as the first part.

The ending was unexpected, but nonetheless magical, unique and wonderful.

Khushi has a lot of faith in Arnav. That much is pretty obvious. Their love is sooo heart warming to read about. Truely beautiful. A symbol of their love was the cherry on top. Lovely surprise. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Khushi's answer to Arnav's question at the end of this part was ... probably another part that stood out for me. Wonderful.

Do continue to write stories, long and short as they are always special. Beauties

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

this is so good.. they being together, love stood above everything..
Their faith & love won.. I'm so happy..😊😊😊
thank you for writing another part of this.. otherwise it would have been an open end, every reader thinking an ending of his/her own..
I'm glad you made them together with a new life..

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pavi1

@pavi1

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awesome and beautiful end ...
u r fab in writing...nice piece of work...

thanks for the pm...

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cupcake-

@cupcake-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

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I was secretly hoping for a second part and it looks like you read my mind. lol But i am so happy that you wrote it..

It was beautiful. Hell, beautiful itself falls short of how beautiful this entire oneshot was. Almost like I was reading 'The Notebook' again. Brilliant Dal!

I cannot trust my words to describe how I am feeling after reading this so.. I am going to shut up and float around in the sweet aura that you have created around this story.

Edited by cupcake- - 12 years ago

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

👍🏼 FELT TOUCHED!! KHUSHI IS SUCH A PURE SOUL here..aww no words dear...god bless you!

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

ah!!! I am so glad you have written another part to this one.. It was a perfect ending!! Thank you for thinking something so pure!

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Alyaa_27

@Alyaa_27

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

this is something magical,u've written it sooo well..
its pure n beautiful..
🤗

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Just read both parts of this OS. It is so sweet and heart-touching. Brought tears to my eyes. I love the OS absolutely. Thank you for this treat Dal. 👏 👏 👏

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adventure_roks

@adventure_roks

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

it was simply superb...didnt expect another part and u took me by surprise...
loved the OS very much...
u r right...faith and love can win over fear...
will be waiting for ur next creation...

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thulasi_arshi

@thulasi_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

thks for pm..

beautiful ending❤️

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