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Hey guys , this is my 1st os..!!>...read and let me know hw did you like it!!
HERE GOES THE MY OS:DEEP FROM THE HEART
Prologue:
5 Months and 29 days had passed after Arnav and Khushi's marriage. She had been adjusted and was familiar to arnav's actions .They didin't hurt her anymore.As now the hope she was having lost,now she didint had a little hope that one day arnav would understand her.Although it went like this,love for her husband remained the same.One month before he finally told the reason for her marriage she was shocked moreover she was broken completley hearing that she was bearing all this pain just because of a misunderstanding.she was completly lost..her life was lost.. her love was lost ..her family was lost..She tried to explain everything to arnav but he was never ready to hear her part of the story . Shyam continued making stories about khushi-shyam relation ship.Arnav used to hurt Khushi for every silly reasons, but they managed to act a happily married couple infront of their families.Raizada mansion was happy now,nani mami everyone accepted both khushi and payal as their bahus...

Do comment ...How did you guys like it
comment and likes mean a lot
& let me decide if to continue or not

THANKS!!

INDEX

Prologue: Above
Chapter 1; Scroll down
Chapter 2 : page 4
Chapter 3: page 6...
Chapter 4 :Page 8
Chapter 5 [Last part]:page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey itz very nice one..
Continue it soon
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Originally posted by: zee10

hey itz very nice one..
Continue it soon

yeah waiting 4 comments

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please continue soon loved the concept
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Hey.. here the 1st part...enjoy..!!
Chapter 1:Ahsaas...Perception...

After arnav's marriage he would always manage to stay at office till midnight..for any reason...or by making reasons..
all just for staying away from her...Khushi.This was such an usual day for Arnav.

But for Khushi this day was important she made a new decision which she thought was right.1 more day.Thats all she
should bear all this pain...sorrow...and blaming.>!!>...

As usual Shyam always tried to approach khushi in Arnav's absence although he was always unsuccessfull.
He knew that Arnav is never going to love Khushi again as he kept on injecting anger and hatred for Khushi inside Arnav's heart.

This day Khushi was staring at the night skies..but it was not as usual ...her eyes didin't say anything to the stars...nor did her face..
her expressions were blank...her eyes were blank...without the sparkling she owned before..it was all hollow..!! Shyam kept staring at Khushi by standing on stairs of the poolside,even though Khushi was unaware of this...she kept on staring at the sky...Shyam came closer and grabed her by her arm..

Khushi: Chodiye hume..

shyam{i think snake is better}:Khushi ji kyun samajthe nahi apne aapko..mein kitna baar batana chahta hun ki mein aapse
pyaar karti hun..!!>...

Khushi; Agar aise hone toh bhi..kya??...mein kitna baar batana chahtha hun ki mein aapse bilkul pyaar nahi karta hai..??aur khabhi
na karege...mein tumse sirf nafrat karte hai aur karte rahenge

Snake:Khushiji ..tumhe bhi pata hai ki Arnav tumhe khabhi pyaar nahi karenge..!!...phir kyun humare saath aise karte hai khushi ji??

Khushi: haan , hume pata hai ki woh hume khabhi pyaar nahi karege ..aur hume yeh bhi pata hai ki kyun?...iska karan tum hai...sirf
tum he,..!!... yeh sab tumhare waje se hua..!!...{pointing a finger towards him}

Shyam : {holding her finger and twisting it} wah! Khushiji..!!>...wah!sab kuch pata hai tumhe...aap bilkul sahi keh rahe the.yeh
sab mere waje se hua sirf mere waje se hua...kya karein Khushiji...!!>...mujhe yeh karana padi...aur tumhe kya laga?...mein tum dono ko akele chodenge..khabhi nahi Khushiji..!!>>...woh mein khabhi nahi hone doonga..!!..

Khushi: tum yeh mat socho ki tum jeet gayi..!!...tum hum dono ke beech mein kuch bhi karo!!>...par tum jo kuch bhi karenge
koi farak nahi padega..!!...aur mein khabhi tumhara nahi banonge.!!...khabhi nahi...{ and she took her finger which he was holding and
went to his..no their bedroom!!>..}

Snake noticed someone running through the stairs he gets afraid who is it??
any guess anyone??...Hey don't get overexited..!!>...its only Payal

Payal..:[RUSHES TO KHUSHI]...Khushi yeh sab kya hai..?.iska matlab jethji ne tujhe anjalidi ko bachane keliye shaadi ki?
aur unhone socha ki tum aur shyam pyaar karte hai??...par tumhe yeh mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?kuch toh bol..!!...aur tum sab sach jethji ko kyun nahi bataya? Kya woh tumhe yakin nahi kiya khushi??

Khushi: tum bolo jiji..!...iss halat mein hum kya karoon!...haan..woh anjalidi ko bachane keliye shaadi ki...haan usne galat socha ki mein aur woh shyam...haan jiji...woh mujh par yakin nahi karenge...aur ek bhi baat,..!!>...humne yeh shaadi 6 mahine ke liye ki..!!...[khushi crying by cupping her face with her hands]

Payal:[shocked and almost crying,runs from there to payal's room]

Anjali hears this whole conversation...shyams and khushi's and khushi's and payal's...she feels lost...she feels angry for the most important 2 persons in her life..!!...

1.shyam..for cheating anjali and 4 spoiling her chote's and khushi's life

2.Arnav..for not beliving his wife and for forcing an innocent girl for a contract marriage

Arnav hadn't reached yet.!!>...at next morning 1 call arrives to anjili's phone and it was arnav

Arnav: Di, mujhe ek meeting hein...mein pahhonchne ke liye shayad der hongi..mera indazaar mat karo

anjali with a nod cuts the phone..

That day was Khushi's last day at RM.She was preparing to go at midnight without informing anyone..it was evening..!!
She Although fell sad..!!..but thinking about him.[not him it should be hims..hehe...snake and arnav ]
.she urged herself to go...

Anjali called arnav

Anji: Chote mujhe tumse abhi baat karni hai

Arnav: di , sab teek hai na?

Anji : Chote tum mere baat ko suniye...mujhe tumse abhi baat karni hai aur yeh bahut zaroori hai...
agar tumhe kuch kaam hai toh..woh tum aman ko chod do aur aao..!!..nahi chote tum yahan aane ka Zaroorat nahi
ho...

Arnav : Di, Matlab??...toh kaise?

Anji:tum office ke paas indazaar karo mein do minute mein wahan aaonga...and cuts the phone

Arnav: Teek hai di..aur haan..hello??...hello??kaat kiya..!!

He waits near the office its..8:00p.m...anji comes..and they goes to one cafe...

Arnav : kya di??...yahan kyun mukhe lekar aya..

Anji:tumse baat karni hai

Arnav: haan mujhe woh pata hai di...par abhi tak tum kuch bola bhi nahi..

anjali: yeh 6 mahine contractt ka matlab kya hai chote?

Arnav:Di,,??...tumhe kaise?

Anji: hume Sab kuch pata chal gaya hai...

Arnav : di woh..Khushi

Anji: Khushi??...tum ab bhi usse blame karte hai chote?...sach bina pata tum itni bada fasle kiya?

Arnav : kya sach di??,...mujhe sab sach pata hai...

Anji: tumhe kuch nahi pata hai chote...kuch nahi...Tumhe yeh pata nahi ki Khushi aur tumhara jeejaji ke beech
main sach mein kya chal raha hai...!!

Aranv [gets shocked.]..: di i 'm sorry..mujhe pehle yeh batana chahta tha..!!>...woh khushi aur jeejaji..

Anji: Khushi aur tumhara Jeejaji kya chote??...tum galat samajthi ho...!!...

Arnav: Di, ab tum galat samajthi hun..mujhe sab sach pata hai di...mere baat ab tum suno..

Anji:tumhare baat sunne ke liye kuch nahi hai chote..ab tum mere baat sunonge
[& starts the conversation between snake and khushi]-
Ab tum hi bolo chote,..yeh 6 mahine ka shaadi ka zaroorat..kya di?..mujhe bachane ke liye?..woh bhi
sab sach bina pata?

Arnav: [shocked]Di,.par..kya..khushi?..nahi...

Anji: nahi chote.humara baat khatam nahi hua

[& says wat she heard between payal and khushi]

Anji : ab tum hi bolo chote??...kaun galat samajthi ho?..mein ya tum??tumhari waje se iska zindagi bhi badash hua..
meri pati nahi woh shyam ki galat ki karan se tum Khushi ko saza diya..!!...aur Khushi.??...iss shaadi ki karan bhi bina pata
woh saza le liya...Itni bada saza tumne kaise??...ek ladki ki zindagi mein..ek chutki zindoor aur ek mangalsutr ko
itni bada sthan hai chote..aur tum iss baar iska keemat thod diya chote!..

Arnav B'came speechless..and goes to his car and drives to RM.

Kushi:[gets ready to leave and places Ma's kangan on arnav's table along with a letter..]
everyone was asleep at RM..before leaving their room a last glance at their place...POOLSIDE
it witnessed everything their fights,love,hatred..thinking about all the moments which she thought was the most
precious in her life.thinking about memories which she thought was the most miserable in her life,thinking about fights
they have shared together,...thinking that before this marriage how happy she was with the same person now as her husband.
'Husband' a lone tear started flowing through her cheek.She had to leave before he comes and asks her to.She felt lost
where should she go??..he doesn't care...but glancing at poolside,
the place they first met in the house...
it gave her many sweet memories...it urged her to see dreams...which he broke..
she realised she was crying..she had to leave ...taking their marriage photo[taken after marriage].and puts in her bag
and thus she left..the house she felt and considered home..the house where her heart lived..where he lived..Arnav
Saying his name ever so gently she crossed the RM...By giving it a last and final glance and a weak gentle smile...

Arnav: [ drives as fast as he could in a rush to see her to say sorry...to say he loved her..love her still..]
he reaches RM.the door was open..he rushed to their room...but something was different...a rare silence was covering the room
the silence which was lost 6 months before...


How did it go...i am only going to continue if i recieve likes and comments...
so wait for chapter 2..>!!!..see you soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon yaar.i am waiting😊
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hi please put english translations please
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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nice do continue and pm me thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds very very nice... Waiting eagerly for your update.😊
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Really great story! Continue soon!

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