OS: Deep from the heart - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey do continue and please pm me when u do it was awsom
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please update soon
Was crying by the end
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super cute story...can't wait to hear more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey,...next part will be updated soon..and wil be in english...


Thanks...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really good please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kindly take the ain of pm me...pls pls:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey here's the second chapter from my OS:DEEP FROM THE HEART
Chapter 2 : Lost Love

Recap: Arnav: [ drives as fast as he could in a rush to see her to say sorry...to say he loved her..love her still..]
he reaches RM.the door was open..he rushed to their room...but something was different...a rare silence was covering the room
the silence which was lost 6 months before...

It felt like something was lost,..the jingling of his Ma's kangans was lost...the small figure which always appeared to be sitting
at the poolside staring at the stars...he didin't see it this time..the room was neat and tidy..with a rare silence..like the room was
dead..yes in one way it was..he felt something wrong...anjali came rushing to the room expecting to see arnav and khushi...but
all she saw was arnav standing like he was looking around for someone...

It must be khushi...anjali thought..

Arnav stared at his sister with a confused look on his face:di...khushi..

Anji:Wat happened arnav?

Arnav: Di...khushi is nowhere to be seen...did you see...

Anjali: wat?..no..she not downstairs..i searched...everyone's asleep

Arnav noticing the calender and seeing a big red mark marked on AUGUST 14...

Anjali : noticing and asking: wats about august 14?? anything special?

Arnav: Di woh...

Anjali; leave it...now more important is to find khushi ..let me try her phone...[and then she leaves]

Arnav was stop dead...Thinking about the words he said to her on their weddiing day:

''6 Mahine ke liye''

How come he could say that to her...how could he punishe her like hell for something she didint even know about.
It felt like earth came crashing on to him.He felt he deserved nothing less than this.Yes , he deserved it...for makng her life
HELL.
And thats whenhe noticed a piece of paper with his ma's kangans placed on top
he grabbed the paper and started to read::
[i felt like this letter should be in hindi,dont worry as its english translation is given below.]

Arnav ji,
Hum yeh kehna chahta tha aapko . anek baar mein iska khoshish bhi kiya tha.Phir mujhe pata chal gaya ki aap mere baat ko khabhi

nahi sunenge.mujhe pata nahi ki ab yeh kehne se koi fayada hogi ya nahi...Tumhara jeejaji se mein khabhi nahi pyaar kiya hai ..na

khabhi karanewali hei.
Humare shaadi ke baat mein kuch bhi galat kiya toh maaf kar di jiye. Aur mujhse bhi zyada aaj ki vishataye tumhe pata hi hogi.August

14.Aaj se 6 mahine khatm.Aaj tumhara sara dukh door hongi.sara guzza.sab...mein chalti hun aapka zara dukh lekar.aapko yaad hai ?ek

din tum hi kaha ki aapka zindagi ka sabse bada dukh mein hi hun.Ab tumko koi dukh nahi hogi,Hamesha khushiya hi hogi. Aankhri

baar mein tumse baat karna chahta tha.Lekin ho nahi paye.Aur tumse kuch kehna hai,jab ek doosara ladki tumhare zindagi mein

aaongi hai na,tab tum unko vishwaas karna padi.unpar barosa rakhna padi.Tumhara zindagi se bhi adhik unko pyaar karna paditoh

tum dono khabhi alag na hogi.
Agar tumhe acha lagi ya nahi,woh mangalsutr mein apni sath leti hun.
Shayad ek din hum phirse milega agar kismat ko hum dono ek sath rahna chahta ho toh.
I LOVE YOU.
Khushi.

[English version of letter.]

[Arnav,
i have to say this thing to u..i dont know by saying this now there will be any use or not,there is nothing between me & ur jeejaji.i never

loved him,and never i will.
if i did something wrong...plz forgive my faults.You would be ofcourse knwing about today ,august 14.with today 6 months got

over..today i am going taking all ur pain that u will always smile from now on,one day you told me that i was ur pain and sorrow,but i

wont be anymore.I wanted to talk to you lasly,but i couldnt.And remember,when a second woman comes to ur life,then u should belive

her,love her more than ur life so that u both will never be seperated.and i took that mangalsutr with me.
maybe one day we'll meet again,if destiny want us to be together.
I LOVE YOU
Khushi.]

That's all for this time..see you next time...on chapter 3...
I wouldd love to recive comments and likes..so plz...!!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I sent you a buddy request!! Please pm me the updates!!! Loved it!!

~Ashu <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ooh i like this OS : )

Its lovely, Please update soon and i lovy it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Please update
Loved it all add translations to conversations

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