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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
beautiful and sad!! can u pls PM me the next time u write an update pls:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here is the 3rd part of my OS:DEEP FROM THE HEART.
Enjoy!!

Chapter 3 : Diwali ka intazaar...

Reading the letter a lone ter fell off his eyes.
He did not know what to do next.He wanted to see her,apologise ,call her back,and start a new life full of love.
But he couldn't.Now she was gone.He had to find her he took his car keys and searched every corner of delhi but
couldn't find her...Khushi!

He was lost...yes he lost everything he lost her...his heart that only beats for her felt like it ceased,He hoped again...
consoling himself that she would come back to him...Destiny would bring them together...

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3 or 4 Months had passed now...Arnav now also not letting go of his hope...He waited for her...He wanted an punishment
and was ready to take anything given by her...Exept this...it felt like she was punishing herself...it was 6:00 am...as everyday
he spent a sleepless night thinking about her..thinking about today...

Diwali.It was Diwali...thinking of the same day of the past year made his heart broke again..Last year the same day..He made her see dreams and let it break ...he told her that 'She meant nothing to her'...now regretting every pain he caused her...All
he could do was wait...Wait till the rain comes and clears the drought in his heart...Anjali has announced everything about shyam on the very day she knew the thruth...he was thrown out of RM.Guptas also came to know about contract marriage and everything...
But all they could do was this...WAIT!!

Arnav sitting on thhe bed staring at the clock...6:00 am...thinking she is somewhere..what will be she doing now?
Maybe thinking of him as he does...He missed her...he was missing her...missing her smile...which meant a lot to him...
missing her eyes...which told a lot to him...missing her deep penetrating look...which seemed a lot to him...
missing her...
who meant the world to him...KHUSHI...

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Same time there she was.Khushi.At lucknow...she had a job..and she was leading a good life which was only less in one way..
ARNAV...Her husband...she never forgot to fill her maang everyday...thus she did it today too...standing infront of the mirror staring at the mangalsutr which she felt was the gem of her life..she would clutch onto it...till her heart stops beating...

Hearing the noise from outsinde...she peeped through the window...even though it was only 6:15...people started the rush...khushi suddenly noticed...DIWALI...

The name itself remembered her of the last year...thinking about the cutest moment in her life ever...it meant a lot to her even though he said it did not to him...

she urged herself not to go back to delhi..but today she had to...it was 3 and a half months since she left them...
she had to meet them...just confused about arnav...

She couldn't face him..what if he hadn't changed at all??...What if shyam had not been revealed yet??...then she would be again a failure..how could she know??...NK!
She call NK..

NK;Hello?

Khushi; Naneji...hum bol rahe hai..Khushi

NK:Khushiji...I cant belive this...Khushiji you have change ur number..i tried many times to call u...mein aaj australia chalthe hai
airport pe hai..

Khushi: Naneji..
she was cut by NK

NK:Khushiji now you have to return to RM..Everyone are waiting 4 u...Nanav said about ur contract marriage and everything...u dont need to fear anything khushiji..Shyam ab jail pe hai...Di Naniji,mamiji,mamaji,akash,payal Bhabhi...everyone are waiting...aur Anjalidi ka beti bhi...And Nanav...today is Diwali...Plz khushi bhabhi...come back plz...

Khushi : Haan ...i will go..but..

NK;What but...no buts and ifs...just go its a request...i cant see nanav in pain anymore..

Khushi:Ji...bye

Nk:bye...

Khushi is happy..and she decides to go to rm...

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RM

Arnav at the poolside while anjili enters..:Chote...y r u sitting like this?...dont u know?..khushi dont like seeing u like this so do I...
Then why?...u need Khushi to be happy ...then make her happy...She dont wanna see you cry..and wipes his tears...and today.is her favorite day...do u remember..last year she was the one who lighted the whole poolside but this time...in her absence i cant do that..
its only her right to decorate this poolside with lights..and deepas...[diwali lights]

This makes arnav think about he taking the fairy lights...that anklet..and their almost kiss...anjali leaves worried..everyone at RM are busy with decorations.While arnav was sitting in the Chair at drawing room...

A doorbell rings...arnav is busy reading the newspaper...HP opens the door
HP:Bhabhi..

Khushi;shh...chup..plz...surprise hai..[hearing this HP nods and leaves to kitchen happily..]

Then a sudden breeze touches her face sensing his presence..and her heart:Dhak Dhak...she places a hand on her chest...


Then a sudden breeze touches his face sensing her presence..
he turns back at a sight which he wished to see the past months..,whished?...no..pleaded...

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Send buddy requests for PMs...!!
That is all for the 3rd part ...sorry for leaving you all eager for next part ...
leave coments please...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I read all the chapters in one go and I absolutely loved Khushi left and got a job. I am so glad that she is not pining away and buried in sorrow like the abla nari she is shown to be on tv. can't wait to see what happens when everyone sees her. although I don't like sad endings..I also don't want her to immediately forgive everyone..esp arnav.

that's just my opinion though. your writing and conceptualizing is brilliant!👏
Edited by sushi-la - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
waw...plz contine soon...it was ttooo goood to read.
i loved it..plz continue sooonnn..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
continue soon !
loved this part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
aww...

awesome update...

loved to see the independent khushi...

and shes back...wonder how arnav will react..

eagerly waiting for the next part...please continue soon..

and thanks for the pm..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
nice yaar
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Lovely update soon and PM! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
i read all parts in one go very nicely written waiting for next part do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
really great, so emotional. Please continue.

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