Payal's Nightmare Updated Part 5 page 9 - Page 4

Originally posted by: neetusidhu

wow i loved it...it was amazing...its totally different from payals character and cant wait to see what happens next...

Hello neetusidhu,

Thanks for you comments on Part 2 of Payal's Nightmare. Yes I have tried to reinvent Payal's character from the demure and shy girl we see on the show. Here is she empowered, afraid but strong and really reacts to adversity in a very different way from the Payal on the show. Really glad you like the story so far. Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts on this part and the story. Really appreciate you doing that.

Best Wishes,

KF

Originally posted by: dumas

damn payal parent really don't care for their daughter she is a fighter she will make her self so strong awesome update please pm can't wait to read more

Hi dumas,

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave your kind comments as always. Really appreciate it. I will PM you when I next update which should be fairly soon.

Take Care,

KF

Your writing is very emotive..

Originally posted by: Lovearhi

Your writing is very emotive..

A very nice thought out idea..different from the usual...i pity the women that actually have to go through this...

Hi Lovearhi,

Thank you so much for your kind words on Payal Nightmare part 2. I really appreciate it. Yeah, the story is definitely different from anything I've read on IF and anything I've written before ie. the whole idea of marrying a murderer and solving his crime and saving yourself from him all at the same time. Plus there is the common practice in so many places where arranged marriages go wrong always for the woman. But in future parts of this story you will see a different Payal from the one on the show go head to head with the "monster" as she refers to him. True, it is very sad for the women who actually do marry men who are mean, violent and dangerous for them. Thanks for taking the time to comment. I found your thoughts on part 2 very interesting.

Take Care,

KF

I will be posting Payal's Nightmare Part 3 shortly. And will send PMs out to all on the list. I hope you like it.

KF

that was really intense...so glad to see that payal beat the living crap out of him...cant wait to see what happens next ...and who is the monster...is it shyam??? akash or arnav or someone else...

That was really intense! How ever do u manage to write it so realistically! i look forward to the next part!