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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

Payal's Nightmare Part 1

Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

Here is a new OS on Payal. Please do read it and give your feedback and let me know what you think.
It is called Payal's Nightmare.

Regards,

KF

Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago

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Mr.TalentScout

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Posted: 13 years ago

Pretty amazing work, my assistant and I have been following your writing, and this storyline falls more into the range of suspense and mystery with a lot of women's issues thrown in.

You could also say it falls into the thriller genre, which has a big demand in Hollywood.

Good work, we liked it. Thanks for writing it in English or we'd be lost.

Do you plan to continue this storyline for the Payal character?

Once again, good work, and please continue this track. Good cliffhanger...

My people and I will check in from time to time to see what you write.

Cheers,

Josh

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serialmaniac

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Posted: 13 years ago

Is that husband of hers shyam????...do continue...u write well

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ah..! That was a cruel thing happened to Payal!!

It portrays a typical village scenario..! The sister concern is very true!

Nicely written dear! Good job..! 😊

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

love it please continue so don't like arrange marriages

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.Euphoria.

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Posted: 13 years ago

I loved it! I really felt for Payal...

Will you be continuing this?

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mr.TalentScout
Pretty amazing work, my assistant and I have been following your writing, and this storyline falls more into the range of suspense and mystery with a lot of women's issues thrown in.

You could also say it falls into the thriller genre, which has a big demand in Hollywood.

Good work, we liked it. Thanks for writing it in English or we'd be lost.

Do you plan to continue this storyline for the Payal character?

Once again, good work, and please continue this track. Good cliffhanger...

My people and I will check in from time to time to see what you write.

Cheers,

Josh

Hi Josh,

I thought I would explore the issue of arranged marriages in India and how little say the girls have or rather they have no say in the matter which really only concerns them after all they are the ones who will have to live with whoever their parents choose for them. Particularly how the parents often force the girls to marry someone who tends to be the wrong choice for them.

I am thinking of adding a second part to it. Thank you for your interest. I really appreciate all your advice and your feedback.

Take care,

Armin

Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing Work! I am really fond of thrillers and a cliffhanger like this creating suspense and horror is really good. You should write a thriller play!

Thanks for the PM