Payal's Nightmare Updated Part 5 page 9 - Page 5

Originally posted by: neetusidhu

that was really intense...so glad to see that payal beat the living crap out of him...cant wait to see what happens next ...and who is the monster...is it shyam??? akash or arnav or someone else...

Hi neetusidhu,

Glad you liked part 3. No, the monster is a new character, but he is not Shyam who is not part of this story. It isn't Akash or Arnav either. A new diabolical character who shall only be called the monster because I want people to focus on his personality and his evil deeds rather than his name. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Really appreciate you input on Part 3 of Payal's Nightmare.

Best Wishes,

KF

Purrrfect...you write so well. you should be a author

Originally posted by: dumas

amazing update i love this payal she has some back bone on her damn she is great the emotionally roller coaster she was on perfectly phrase the words the action that is great writing awesome can't get enough loved it still you have not tell us that monsters name or any of his family names is like the story is only on her and everyone else is just passing strangers not worth remembering loved it

Hi dumas,

Glad you liked Part 3 of this story. Like the pic of Deepali/Payal. The only reason I didn't and haven't named the other new characters is that I want her husband to be called a monster because he is one. If I would have given him a name it wouldn't have the same punch as the moniker "monster".

As for the boy it was hard to name him too. Because he too is an unknown quantity in the story at this point. I think sometimes naming a character confines them and restricts them in some way. For the boy at times he is almost adult like in his behavior at other times in the story he is meek and weak. Which is why I haven't named him either. For now he just the "boy". So far we don't even know who he is. You'll find out in later updates;)

As for the parents of the monster I am still trying to figure out what part they will play because they too will play a significant part and pivotal part in Payal's journey. It remains to be seen if Payal can form any allies in this story because so far she is alone in her fight against the monster and all the new characters we have seen so far.

Loved your comments BTW. Thanks for reading and putting your thoughts down on this part (3) of the story. Really appreciate you taking the time to give your feedback. Thank you.

Take Care,

KF

Originally posted by: -GreenEnvy-

like payal, i was disappointed with the boy too.
but i wonder at the same time who he is...
how easy would it be for the sole cook of the family to fix their food...

Hi GreenEnvy,

Ah, yes the boy is a mystery at this point of the story. But in later updates you'll find out who he is:) Now there's an idea, fix the food:) Thanks for reading and taking the time to put down your thoughts on Part 3 of the story. Really appreciate knowing how busy you are with your own writing.

Take Care,

KF

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

That was really intense! How ever do u manage to write it so realistically! i look forward to the next part!

Hi areeba,

Thank you for reading and posting your thoughts on part 3 of Payal's Nightmare. Glad you liked it so much. Appreciate you taking the time to post your feedback and reading it.

Take Care,

KF

Originally posted by: littlemoi

Loved this update!! It was definitely very intense!! Love how Payal put up a fight against the cruel monster!!

Plz continue soon with the next update!! O & thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!

Hi littlemoi,

Thanks for reading part 3. Glad you liked it, yes it is a bit intense. I will try to update soon. Most welcome for the PM. Appreciate your interest in this story.

Take Care,

KF

Originally posted by: pri12

😊😊niceee

Hi pri,

Glad you liked part 3 of Payal's Nightmare. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment on it. Appreciate it greatly.

Take Care,

KF

Originally posted by: serialmaniac

Purrrfect...you write so well. you should be a author

Anyway, according to me that tall boy is arnav, house servant ...that moster is shyam n his first dead wife is anjali 😎

Hi serialmaniac,

Thanks so much for your kind words on my writing. Actually you are very perceptive, I am an author. Just waiting for my first novel to be published it is going through the final edit. All very exciting. Very soon it will be available on Amazon.

Sorry to disappoint you but the tall boy is not Arnav, and the monster is not Shyam neither is Anjali the first bride:) These are all new characters I've created. The only character you will be familiar with is Payal but her character is quite different from the show. In my story she courageous and independent and without fear and full of rage.

Thanks for reading and putting down your thoughts on Part 3. Appreciate it greatly.

Take Care,

KF

Hello all,

I have finished Part 4 of Payal's Nightmare. I will be posting it shortly. I hope you like it. Do read it and let me know what you think and press the like button. Thanks.

Take Care,

KF

omg this is such a different story..i think u really have thought about this really well and its something out of the box!! keep going ur doing great!!