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OS: Unbelievable


'Unbelievable,' Arnav said to himself as he watched her walk out of the room.


Did she really think that all she had to do was come into his room, not even say a single word, just look at him with those tear-filled wide eyes of hers and he would go down to the Pooja even though he'd already refused Akash and Lavanya?


'Unbelievable,' Arnav said out loud as he closed his laptop and walked out of the room.


He went and sat in the only available space which was next to Khushi. Lavanya leaned across Khushi to talk to him. 'ASR, you came!'


Arnav ignored her to look at Khushi who was fidgeting in her seat as if she was anxious to leave. He leant towards her slightly and whispered, 'I'm here now aren't I? Why are you still so restless?'


Khushi looked up in shock as if she had only just realised he was even sitting beside her. 'You're here?'


'I'm here,' Arnav said nodding his head slowly trying to figure out the apprehensive expression on her face.


Khushi stopped moving all of a sudden and straightened her back, sitting up properly before she took a deep breath, 'you're here.'


'Unbelievable,' Arnav thought to himself as he watched her expression calm and relax as his own did too.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kaash aisa hi ho...Kaash!!😛
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"Im here", that does give the comfort and security to Khushi doesnt it?

Wonderful OS Shuheda, but wayy too short. lol!
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Damn, that was too short! :P

But amazingly beautiful. I love how his 'I'm here' had so much intensity in it that it helped her calm down. Wonderful OS Nayika! (:

--Garima
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So short but so adorable! Always love your writing ⭐️
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fantastic OS...loved how he came down only for her and how his words calmed her down...truly made for each other...loved it
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Fantastic stuff Shuheda!
I wish we could see something like this actually happen!
Beautifully done angel.
⭐️
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sweet!! kash sach me aise hoti toh...😳
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Kya aisa ho sakta hein? Don't think so...but no harm in dreaming...😍
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Originally posted by: -Garima-

Damn, that was too short! :P


But amazingly beautiful. I love how his 'I'm here' had so much intensity in it that it helped her calm down. Wonderful OS Nayika! (:

--Garima



Sorry! It's just supposed to be the scene that I really want to happen tomorrow and also an explanation for Arnav's out of character 'unbelievable' today.

Originally posted by: nyxx

"Im here", that does give the comfort and security to Khushi doesnt it?

Wonderful OS Shuheda, but wayy too short. lol!



I think it really would if he just went down for her!

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Kaash aisa hi ho...Kaash!!😛



I know!

Originally posted by: Jasleen

So short but so adorable! Always love your writing ⭐️









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