OS: Unbelievable - Page 5

cool os unbelievable shuheda and i loved the lines "iam here and you're here"

nice os. loved how he used "unbelievable"

ahaha, it made me smile. Short but very sweet :D Nice work. xx

woww.loved it.this was really cute.loved it

Originally posted by: 18shabbo

OH!!GOD...OH!!GOD...OH!!GUD!!!!...im speechless n u are marvellous👏...it was short bt it had just great lengths of emotions n DECLARATIONS...u actually made my day😃...been depressed on how ppl thout Arnav was insensitive to Khushis tears n how unneccessary da UNBELIEVABLE was...but how can we forget da "tum theek ho..kuch chahiye...kuch baat karni hai?..."😭
we know he'll come down..watever reason he may give but is true reason will b Khushi...😉
n today U really had me on..."u here-da question...nod-im here-the answer(felt like reassurence thou)...n...sit back straight-u here-da realization"...👍🏼i really just wanted to like literally touch ur feet...
bt lotsss of🤗s for u...this was just splendid...

Thank you sooo much :D

Glad you liked it!!

No need to touch my feetm the virtual hugs are more than enough! :DD

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

awww!! Shuey!! That is so sweet!! seriously that was the best.

The only reason that Khushi went to his room was for support that she didn't even realize she wanted from him

Loved how you put that into the OS :D

Thanks so much Mya! Yeah totally subconsciously she goes to Arnav :)

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

Loved it 😃

Originally posted by: maanviluvzvirat

IT WAS SHORT AND CUTE

THANX FOR THE PM

Originally posted by: smileyhug7679

wow such a nice one shot
arnav is there for kushi

Originally posted by: zafi

Loved it.👏 Thanks for clarifying the unbelievable part. I hope this does happen.

Awesome writing as always.👏 Thanks. 😉

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: reyabear

Short & sweet! Loved it! :D

Originally posted by: Supna9

Good Os but too short i wish sumthing like this happen in da show :-)

Originally posted by: smitar

Arnav looked at her just as he did on the day she went to him & said, Meri Bathi Jal Nahin Rahi He, didn't he?

Brilliant idea!

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

"I'm here." has so much security and warmth behind it <3

Beautiful OS Shuheda <3 :D

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

nice😊

Originally posted by: lwfw

aww good imagination. nagz i agree with you kash aisa hi hota 😍
thanks for such a cute OS 😳

but he will come down because of that , but will CVs show his thought process unimaginable 🤣

Originally posted by: malluangel

:P always will be...kaash. cept arnies like the most emotinally run emotinal dude ever. k so. ya.

Originally posted by: arhi-sarun-fan

This is unbelievably lovely😃
Thanks for the pm

Thank you so much everyone! Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: akshi_2

Omg!! I reallyy hope this happens! It will be super cool!

Originally posted by: angie_g82

if you can lengthen it up with a few spice:D:D:D:D

Originally posted by: anita_21492

awesome but short

nevertheless i loved it

Originally posted by: mohitkizee

Nice

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

this OS floored me woman! ur too good!

Originally posted by: littlemoi

wonderful wonderful os!

Originally posted by: immayurfan

Nice os

Originally posted by: sparikh

short & sweet...no other words needed! keep it rolling, N!

-Sona

Thanks everyone :)

Originally posted by: magi11

short but lovely os..

Originally posted by: Luckyforever

Lovely update

Originally posted by: savvz

wonderful...

Originally posted by: bhavnah

it was wonderful

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

I just wish this would happen...

Originally posted by: -Gautami

Amazin OS.
Luvd it!!

Originally posted by: uniquebluerose

Superb dear...well titled actually...one of short and sweet OS i have read!!!!!!!!!

Thank you all!

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

It was too short!! Before my smile started widening the OS ended!! Unbelivable😃..!

Nice cute OS! Will make sure to bring a smile on every reader's face!

Glad you liked it even though it was short :P

Originally posted by: Raha26

Really amazing!
This is first time I read a "dreaming" segment!
Short and very good!

Originally posted by: kausar1219

amazing!!!

can u write anoder plz but a little longer one...dis lends makin us want for more...

but its absolutely wonderful!!!!

Originally posted by: soni4eva

wow dat was a short n beautiful os

luvd it x

Originally posted by: arnshi

Short and lovely.⭐️
I just so wish this to happen.

Originally posted by: arooshee

nice

Originally posted by: dyhardfan

Love it when arnav says unbelieve. Thanks great os

Originally posted by: SiRul

Love asr" unbelievable

Thanks everyone!

Originally posted by: nadak

ahaha, it made me smile. Short but very sweet :D Nice work. xx

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

nice os. loved how he used "unbelievable"

Originally posted by: moon_mine

superb one!!!!

jst loved it!!!!

Originally posted by: mademoiselle927

SWEET :)

Originally posted by: devishree

cool os unbelievable shuheda and i loved the lines "iam here and you're here"

simply superb

Originally posted by: rumu

Very sweet 😊..

Originally posted by: meenaluma

short but great os

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Nice os

Originally posted by: sarach

woww.loved it.this was really cute.loved it

Thank you all!