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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

it wasnt boring at all!!

it was a pleasure to read!!

awesome work on portraying arnav's thought and arhi's feelings!!

thank you soo much for the pm!!

absolutely loved reading this!!!

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Fatima

@.infinite.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Amazing OS...loved it...👏

u described everything so beautifully😍..!!

and it wasn't boring at all...i loved reading it...😳

amazing work...keep it up...👍🏼

luv,

Fatz🤗

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ravenheart

@ravenheart

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Bristy, just one word "WOW".

All the best for your assignments.

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

hey don't call it boring...then what would you call my looonnnggg ramblings huh

Its just brillant...i love it

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Nihson

@Nihson

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Lovely OS
Arnaav's pov was portreyed nicely

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Amazing my friend! I loved it SO much! Such beautifully captured sentiments! Poerty! :)

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

It was simply beautiful. Amazing, brilliant, romantic, intense! It was everything. Loved reading it. I can't wait to see how Arnav reacts to the hug. ❤️

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Omg if you managed to write this just like that or whatever came to mind, i cant even imagine what extent you can go when you actually intensly think about Arhi and not have any assignments to worry about. But, seriously I LOVED THIS. Everything was beautifully depicted...the narration, emotion, plot, and just the overall feelings of Arnav. I liked how you showed it from his perspective..some of the lines and the use of words touched me alot! Like when he said his and her home was right there, in each others arms..AWWWHHH MANNN!😳 Loveddd ittt completelyy!

Do write more but first, goodluck for youre assignments haha!

- Dee

Edited by nyxx - 13 years ago