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@Anisha_91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

OMG!!!

wow this is absolutely AMAZING!!! seriously loved how u wrote from Arnie's perspective. You've written beautifully. and these two lines were just breath taking 'I saw my life running back towards me' and 'Home. The word flashed in my mind. Hers and mines right here, in this moment' WOW those two lines were mind blowing x

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Badra

@SublimeSanaya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

nice one dr ... u have nicely analyzed whats up there in Aranv's head ..

it made me re-live the precap all over again ... now i think i can survive until mon ... and the flow of emotions were heart soothing and i am having a hard time to breath here ... so toucy

so keep up the good work and keep send pms ..

- -badra

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ClaraOswald

@ClaraOswald

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Awesome os , absolutely loved it especially the ending . Such a great read . 👏

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Awww that was really cute... i hope this happens😊

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shybabe

@shybabe

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

It was so awesome darling...i so wish this happens...i really wish he hugs her bag and comforts her...😃 thanks for the pm

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

That was SHO cute <3 You are such a brilliant writer!

Absolutely loved it!

Btw, thank you for using my siggy. No need to credit me 😳

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Siva

@siva2901

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Wowww lovely update really awesomeee👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i can visualize ur post 😍😃. ARNAV feeling were beautifully explained . Love ur post❤️

u r fantastic 😎. ur dialogues were amazing 👏. Thanks a lot for giving a lovely post

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Loved it

This was my favorite line

It's the demon inside me that brings out this taste of salt in her otherwise sweet life.

Great Job

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

wow! That was too good, Rain! Loved how u got his emotions...

Keep writing pls...

-Sona

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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

OMG!!! so dis is da reason Arnav is in casuals...da mystry is solvd thanks to u😉...loved everything u wrote👏👏👏...Arnav has made a punchin bag out of himself n keep on thrashin on his feelins for Khushi...wat he needs is to read wat u ppl write with so much passion n understand wats happenin 2 him or a gud counterattack convo with KKG...KKG is his salvation...da whole world knws it even da dhaba walas knw dis bt chocolaty pati is still reelin...bt in de end da heart rules...da POV is exceptional...visualize dis n u can easily see ASR from friday n create a whole spectrum for monday...thanks for writin...👏👏👏
👏👏P.S...plezzz contd HIs garden her jalebis ..plezzz plezzz...😭

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