OS: And I Hug You Back

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Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

this was amazing, i really enjoyed reading it because it seemed very realistic, like I can almost imagine this happening. Thank you, good luck on getting your work done x

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incandescent

@incandescent

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Lovely. NOt at all confusing and boring!!

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Danina

@Danina

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Amaaazzing:D:D

LOOVED it:D:D

Arnavs emotions were sooo nicely portrayed:D

Awesum:D

thanks for the pm:D

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american_desi

@american_desi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

OMG that was so amazing!! Loved it!! So many emotions going through his head!! But in the end it was like coming home!!

Wow!! Thanks so much for making the weekend! Really not sure why you thought it was boring!! L O V E D IT!!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

hai!!!!!!!!!!!!! this needs to happen. thanks for sharing!

xxx

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Perfect! This oneshot made my day :)

There were many wow moments in this piece of work, and it wasn't boring at all! Loved Arnav's conflict of thoughts in the car and the clarity later - on hugging her. I also liked the way Arnav feels that usually he makes her cry otherwise she is strong. You are one of the most talented writers here on the forum, and my personal favourite 😳

Keep Writing 🤗

Lots of Love

ZeeJay :)

PS: your good name ?

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

We only get to watch their feelings on their faces, but what you've written cleverly explained their real deep feelings/thoughts very well... very interesting, but never boring...

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

OMG that was so oufff. So deep and touchingHow i wish Arnie Boys was actually reasoning like this. When i read this

"It was as if we have been hugging each other for years, it was as if she's been seeking solace in my arms forever and I've been providing it for her.
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it felt as if the words i have been seeking to describe the precap had suddenly appeard b$ me. You are gifted. Plz Pm me when u write up anyting