my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Wow! Finally Shlok is back and with his Aasthu!!

From the beginning, I loved the Aastha-Sojal part... Even Varad was away for all these months... So even Sojal was waiting for her husband... Both were eager to meet their better halves...

And then finall the moment when Shlok held Aastha... The silent conversation was described beautifully...

And now the pain... Hope Aastha and Avantika are both fine... Ofcourse you won't let anything happen to them...

Waiting for the next...

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Saibhargav

@Saibhargav

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#212

wow anu superbly written it is

loved it

Shlok came back to his Aasthu caressing her tummy superb it is

now waiting for Avantika to come out

superblt handled wonder how he came to her so suddenly after h didnt talk to er 3 months

but anu since starting of ff u r writing love and emotional updates we want to see our dramebaaz Aasthu now Shlok came to her thoda nokjok bhi add karlena plsss

but i liked the way u wrote ur story superb it is

gud going

keep it up

thanks for this ff

waiting for next part

continue soon

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rd0309

@rd0309

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Finally the glimpse of present Shlok, amazing it was. But sad part is that just when Aastha met her happiness after so long time, she's not able to cherish that moment longer. Waiting for next update!

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: syvalini
wow anu... it was awesome update
so nicely expressed their convo
beatifully written... i loved the way u wrote
finally... shlok came back to asthu wonderful
yes sometimes silence is better than words to understand anything...
i am so happy dear now asthu was going to delivery...
ur rocking dear...
keep it up... waiting... for next

Thank u di... Ya silence is better than words...
Avantika is coming soon... Next update will be soon...
Thank u di...

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: ..optimist..
Wow! Finally Shlok is back and with his Aasthu!!
From the beginning, I loved the Aastha-Sojal part... Even Varad was away for all these months... So even Sojal was waiting for her husband... Both were eager to meet their better halves...
And then finall the moment when Shlok held Aastha... The silent conversation was described beautifully...
And now the pain... Hope Aastha and Avantika are both fine... Ofcourse you won't let anything happen to them...
Waiting for the next...

Pray for avantika and astha... Shlok's return is a prayer for her...

Sojal is a good natured girl... She was willing to sacrifice her happiness for her family...
Thank you di... I am honoured with your words...

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Saibhargav
wow anu superbly written it is
loved it
Shlok came back to his Aasthu caressing her tummy superb it is
now waiting for Avantika to come out
superblt handled wonder how he came to her so suddenly after h didnt talk to er 3 months
but anu since starting of ff u r writing love and emotional updates we want to see our dramebaaz Aasthu now Shlok came to her thoda nokjok bhi add karlena plsss
but i liked the way u wrote ur story superb it is
gud going
keep it up
thanks for this ff
waiting for next part
continue soon

Oh you want nantuki asthu... But I don't know about that... I am an emotional writer... But I will try some. ..

Than Ku Sai...

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: rd0309
Finally the glimpse of present Shlok, amazing it was. But sad part is that just when Aastha met her happiness after so long time, she's not able to cherish that moment longer. Waiting for next update!

Will update soon.. Ashlok are meant to be together... Not matter what... Good days will come...

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vaishux

@vaishux

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Hey..sorry for not commenting on the other updates for a while...

Read all in one go...

Very nicely and beautifully written...so emotional...😉

I am happy that shlok is back...😳👏

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: vaishux
Hey..sorry for not commenting on the other updates for a while...
Read all in one go...
Very nicely and beautifully written...so emotional...😉
I am happy that shlok is back...😳👏

Thank u for taking time to read the updates...
I think you forgot about the story...

Thank u... Will update the next part soon...

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anumol

@dazzles

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#220

[COLOR= red]PART 19 I opened my eyes... I saw the white ceiling which is not i known... I looked around... One lady is sitting on the chair little far away from me... 'shlok... 'I called I saw the lady turned towards me ... 'you woke up... I will call the doctor...' Before she turn to go i called her 'shlok...' 'don't worry he is outside... I will ask him to come ...' She turned and fade away from my sight... I felt pain in my whole body... There is no energy left in my body either... My eyes dropped without my consent... I felt someone kissed me on my forehead... I know it is him... i opened my eyes slowly... I saw his face near to me... One drop tears from his eyes fall down on my cheeks... He sat down next to me holding my hands in his hold... 'shlok what happened...?' I asked while touching my tummy... I looked down to my body... It is flat . I looked again to his eyes without seconds my eyes turned into moist... Before the drop of tears fell down my eyes... I heard 'avantika is safe...' I looked at his eyes... I felt it is glowing... I closed my eyes for thanking the god for given me a second chance... 'i want to see her shlok...' I said looking at his face... 'she is in incubator... ' 'is she healthy...'i asked i only want my child healthy... If she is dark or fair... It doesn't matter... 'perfectly... And beautiful like you...' He whispered it in my ears... I looked into his eyes and smiled at him... 'i afraid...' I said 'but I promised you that I never let you go... ' I lay there silently... ' I want to see her shlok...' I said pleading...before he answer 'mrs shlok how are you now...?' I heard Dr Malini's voice... I smiled at her 'fine Dr.' 'but you make us all worried... It is a premature birth... Need to take care of the baby carefully... And also yourself...complete rest for few days...' She said and turned to the nurse... 'shift her to room...' 'k Dr. ' and the nurse walked away... ' Dr ... Can she see the baby...' Shlok asked.she looked at me and smiled 'i will inform the paediatric doctor... Astha she is beautiful just like you...' And she walked back from there... shlok sat next to me and looked into my eyes... 'what happened really shlok...?' I asked to him... I need to know what really happened... 'hmm the amniotic fluid broke... When we reach here you are unconscious... I worried a lot... And when the baby turns the umbilical cord turned around her neck... The doctor only give 50 50 chances...' I saw the tears falling from his eyes ... 'They need to take the baby out soon... Then we all decided to go for the operation... I want you both... I don't know what to do... If anything happened to you... Then the next moment I also came with you... ' I kept my hands to his mouth... I want to hug him... I want to kiss him... I want to enjoy my every time with him... ************ At evening they shifted me to the room... Everyone is waiting for me... I smiled at them... But my mind is eager to see my baby... Mom came up to me... 'meri bechei...' She side hugged me... I realized one thing it doesn't matter how much I grown I am still her little girl... 'plz let her sleep... She need to take rest...' The nurse warned my mom... She withdrew from me... I looked at ayi's face... Her eyes is enough me to realize what she gone through the last few months... 'mrs shlok you can see your baby...' The nurse arrived with a wheel chair considering my condition... Shlok and ayi helped me to sat on it... My mind again starts to revolve around my little girl... How was she now? How she looks...? What I gonig to say to my little girl... I hold shlok's hand tightly and looked at his eyes... He assured me... It is k... We arrived at the infant area... The nurse make us wear the aprons... I looked at shlok's face then and now... The nurse take us to my baby... I saw a small baby sleep inside the glass walls... I tight my hold on his hand... I came near to the baby... I saw my child for the first time... I felt my eyes turned moist... She is sleeping... Her eyes closed like a blooming flower bud... As shlok said she is beautiful... I want to hold her, feed her... I want to sing for her... I felt his hands wiping my tears... 'she is beautiful shlok...' I mumbled... He kneeled down next to me...and hold my both hands in his... And smiled... And I return it... Words can't able to explain how I felt ... The nurse take her from the incubator and came up to me... She gave me my little child to me... Shlok helps me to hold her... How beautiful this moment... 'carefully... She is too sensitive... There are lot of chances for infection...' The nurse said... I looked at her and nodded... I looked at her face... She is sleeping... How beautiful she looks... Her eyes closed... Lips parted... There is only little hair... The drop of tear fall down from eyes... 'shlok... She has little hair...' I said to him... 'hmmm' he said while touching her little arms... 'Premature birth that's why... Don't worry it will grow soon...' The nurse said while arranging the incubator with new set of sterilized cloths... 'She is looks like you...' Shlok whispered on my ears... I felt his voice as a sweet melodies... 'but her nose is just like yours...' I said pointing my fingers to his ... 'and I am sure she will like you in her character...' 'how you know that..? ' I asked 'because... I don't know...' I saw his lips curved into a smile... Oh god how much I missed this... I take my gaze from him when the nurse ask me to give baby back... I don't want... But there is no other option... I looked at shlok's face and to my girl... 'avantika... Mom will be here... Don't worry my girl... Papa will save us from all devils ' I touched her nose with my fingers lightly...I want this moment to stay still... The perfect picture with my child and my soul... [/COLOR]

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