my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5 - Page 20

Absolutely loved the update. Don't worry about the story, we are loving it.

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

nice it is anu

concentrate on xams

dont worry ur story is superb

we all like it

gud going

hope u write more in future

stay blessed lady

thanks for this ff

Another story is already shaping up in my mind...
Thank u...

Originally posted by: pooja186

wow very nice update dear...and above all concentrate on ur studies samazla...or else c

Thank u pooja...
I will

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Hey
I didn't know that u updated.U didn't pm me.Plz pm me whenever u update.

Loved
ayi talking about how she overcame d hardships after NA's death n how she took
d responsibilities strongly 4 d sake of her family.Aastha asked y Varad is with
shlok if everything is ok,she put Kavya's name 2 get d answer from Sojal.Loved
sojal saying that kavya needs 2 understand d situation as she is a girl.Loved
Shlok's words that evenafter d fight when he is angry with aastha her smile
melts him.If she doesn't endd fight he himself will do it as he cant live
without being with her.FB was very romantic.Bathroom fight...then later
unexpectedly Shlok hugs her from behind n decides 2 name their daughter
avantika.he is sure that it will b a girl like God gave aastha 2 him.Poor
Aastha's health itself got affected due 2 stress caused by Shlok's mysterious absence.Shlok
upset abt keeping up d reputation of the company NA had made.Aastha giving him
support n comfort in trouble was soothing.Aastha isn't really aware of d prob
shlok is facing actually.Shlok touching her tummy n kissing it was sweet.shlok
slept off fast,his indiff behavior upsets her.wish he had shared it with her.Suddenly
Shlok decided 2 go to America giving her a shock.he didn't even tell her y he
wants 2 go.he told her not to call him as he doesn't have anything 2 talk.so
sad.i understand aastha's pain.he hid d reason excusing that she wont
understand it.its sure that shlok is hiding it from her 4 a genuine reason.is
he sick or sth?when he called her aastha she corrected him Aasthu.She found a
single simple diff in his talk.that touched my heart.but I loved when shlok
said once he will return.that gives so much of hope.Aastha was so lost after
shlok went.She was tensed abt him.so as she wished varad went near shlok.everybody
consoling aastha was emotional.loved their family.

These
dialogues were beautifully written.very emotional:

'When niranjan ji died I felt I lost everything...a life
without him is unthinkable... I never ever thought I need to stand as a single
mother... He gone after created a void in my life... A space that no one can
replace... Even my children... Astha... Before you crying,shlok is not walk
away from you... As he said he will come...till that you need to be strong...
Don't you know distance never matter in a relationship if you are loyal to each
other... I know my son... He always keeps his word... If he give his word then
he will come back... Astha... I don't want you to cry...

While reading I did'nt
feel that it's a normal FF.I felt that I was reading a novel.u r beyond my
expectations.<b></b>

Chechi you made me smile... I loved the long comments... It felt the spirit to write more ...


Hmmm shlok lives her so much... Ya something is wrong in his life...
Anjali is a strong head lady...


Ps: Sorry Chechi I updating it from mobile... I can't able to pm the update. ...
I am very sorry...but I will hope you will check it for updates...



Keep commenting like this...
Thank u chechi 😊

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Don't worry about the story... We all are loving it...😃

Do concentrate on your studies...

Thank u di for your every support

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Loved the update... Esp the part where Anjali comforts Aastha and tells her to have faith and be strong... Very well written👏

So everyone except Aastha knows the reason I guess, but they have kept it hidden from Aastha, for the baby maybe...

Waiting for the next...😊

You are thinking alike me... 😆

Ya they all know expect astha 😭



Baby and shlok will come soon... 😉

Originally posted by: rd0309

Absolutely loved the update. Don't worry about the story, we are loving it.

Thank u for all of your support 😊

PART 17

I looked around the darkness... I checked my phone it is almost 1 am.
Kavya is sleeping peacefully warping her little arms around me... I hugged her back... I felt peace... I closed my eyes for a sleep... That I lost somewhere in my journey.
****************
Next day
'hello dada...'
'astha... How are you now..?'
'dada... I am alright and the baby also...'
'hmmm... We two worried...'
'two...! How is he...?'
'fine... He tensed when he didn't get the usual call from you...'
'then why he keeping quiet...'
'astha... We have a deal...'
'yes... I remember I never ask anything regarding his trip... Henna dada...'
'astha... Take care... You may hear a good news soon...'
'is he decided to return.?'
'he will... But I am not sure about when...? Your love will keep him strong...'
'i am going to call him now...'
'hmm... K... Bye'
I cut the call... And dialled his number... Three rings he picked the call...
'shlok...'
'why asthu... Don't you take care of yourself... You don't know how much I worried when ayi called us... I lost my breath... What to say... You are always like that... Careless... what you going to do without me... 'he continue without a full stop... And I didn't want either... It is almost 3months I heard his voice... It felt a music for my eyes... I felt my eyes turned moist again... Oh god plz save this moment for the rest of my life...
'come back shlok...' I Said my voice cracked in my throats...
I felt the silence again... I heard a feeble sound of his heartbeats...
'shlok... Talk to me...'
'asthu... ' my name again on his lips... I felt I am in a dream...
We stay like for a long... I didn't realize the time fly... I came back to earth when I heard dada's voice...
'astha...'
'dada... Where is he I want to talk to him...'
'astha... Relax... He walk out of the room..He is going to be back... Soon... '
'when dada? How much I need to wait... My entire life? Ask him to come back soon... I want him here when my baby arrives... ' I said sharply and cut the call and threw it on the bed...
Tears are rolling from my eyes... I want to scream... I want to burst my lungs out... I cried loudly... I don't care about any others... My own plight is big enough me to deal...
I heard sojal's and ayi's voice from downstairs... Within seconds they came up to my room... Ayi came up to me and take me in her embrace... I hugged her and let my tears flow down...
'he called... He talked to me... He is going to back...' I mumbled through my wretched sobs...
'don't cry astha... He will... Now be happy...' She withdrew me from her embrace and cupped my face to wipe my tears ...
' now smile...ok don't worry I will punish him for leave you here...'
I smiled through my tears... She kissed me on my forehead and help me to lay down...
I kept my hands on my baby...
'he is going to be back...' I whispered to my girl...

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very nice it is anu
gud going
wonderful update
atlast we too heard Shloks voice
taking it nicely
thanks again
continue soon

Beautifully written Anu...