my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5 - Page 21

i cant believe it.ashlok talked on d ph.he called her aasthu.it was so overwhelming.its a dream come true.he will come back soon.wow...i hope he comes back soon.but why did'nt shlok complete d conversation with aastha?What is troubling him?
if u can whenever u update plz put the date too along with the chapter no.so that i can know when u updated it

hai anu...

So relieved to hear Shlok's voice at last. Loved the update, finally Shlok is going to be back

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

very nice it is anu
gud going
wonderful update
atlast we too heard Shloks voice
taking it nicely
thanks again
continue soon

Ya wait for the next part... Shlok is going to land

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Beautifully written Anu...

I too felt so relaxed after hearing Shlok's voice through your story... He cares for his Aasthu, he was worried because she didn't call him like always... His words touched my heart just like they touched Aastha's... I am am probably as happy as Aastha that he is coming back soon😃

But why did he leave the conversation abruptly? And what was the reason behind staying so far away from everyone esp from Aasthu and Avantika? And why didn't he speak to Aastha over the phone all these months?

Eagerly waiting to know...

Yes ge is going to be back...
😳 astha's wait is over and the baby also 😆

Everything is a mystery in shlok's life... 😊



Thank u di.. ... Keep commenting...

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

i cant believe it.ashlok talked on d ph.he called her aasthu.it was so overwhelming.its a dream come true.he will come back soon.wow...i hope he comes back soon.but why did'nt shlok complete d conversation with aastha?What is troubling him?
if u can whenever u update plz put the date too along with the chapter no.so that i can know when u updated it

Oh I am happy I can able to make you happy...
There is lot of mystery is need to be revealed...


Thank u for taking time to read this... Keep commenting

Ps: I will put the date ...

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai anu...

sorry dear for commenting late..

it was amazing wat ur writing so touching to my heart..

that anjali was superb consoling astha how to be strong n to wait for her love,

have faith in love...

now got that all know the y shlok left but no one dare to tell astha due to her condition,

but it makes so hard to think wat was happening in her life

now i am so happy more than astha listening to shloks voice...

really it makes relieving all the curiosity of readers...

wow shlok was coming, coming,coming... yahoo...make celebration

now my dear asthu be happy ur shlok is coming na...

but dont worry for the discontinution of his conversation...

once he come back then u fight to the fullest of ur life...

thank u anu for giving such a wonderful ff to us...

dont worry about story its really a amazing one n we all r with u...

thats great ur writing atleast in hectic shedule that too from the mobile...

that shows loyalness towards ur readers do not dissapoint them

thank so much dear...

keep going...

don't say sorry for being late... I can understand... 😊


Ya true anjali is a strong and good hearted lady ... Look how she loves her bahus...


I felt happy that I can able to make you all happy...

Shlok will come soon and also the baby.

Something is need to hide for sometime for the goodness... But it will come out from the darkness one day... Wait for that...




I am honoured with your words... Love you diii... So much thank u for being a loyal reader...



Thank u for your long comment also

Originally posted by: rd0309

So relieved to hear Shlok's voice at last. Loved the update, finally Shlok is going to be back

Shlok is coming back... Wait and see how the story going to unfold...
Thank u for reading and comment...

PART 18
After 2 weeks
'astha, your face is glowing...' Sojal smiled at me... We two walked back to home after visiting the mandir... He is going to be return today... Finally my waits are over... The last one weeks we talk daily... Of course the reason behind his behaviour is still a mystery for me... I only want him near me... If he is happy then I am also...
'hey... Astha are you in dream land...' I looked at her face... Her face is also glowing... I smiled at her and we two walked back to home...
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I sat down on the bed again waiting for him... Only few more minutes is left to see him... I felt my heart thudding in my chest... My eyes felt shivering... I heard the voice of a vehicle... I looked outside to the window... I saw the taxi neatly parked on the front yard... I sat back on the bed...
I don't know how I going to react... He done a grave mistake...but still I love him... And I know how much he love me... I forget everything when he just called me 'asthu'. it said everything... I want to go and see him...but i can't able to afford a breakdown again...but this time..i am not going to afraid... He is here with me...
I heard the door opens... I stood up and look at the above sky through the window... I felt his hands crept into my protruding tummy from behind... I closed my eyes... Tears formed on my eyes and it starts to roll over my cheeks... We two stay there like that... Not a single word passed between us... I absorbed his unique presence to my heart...
Finally he turned me to face him... I looked into his eyes... The eyes that I longing for the last few months...
One drop of tear roll down through my already wet cheeks... He kissed that one... I closed my eyes when his lips touched my cheeks...
My silent tears turned out to be a wretched sobs... I held on to him and cried my plights that I suffer without him...
He just held me to his heart... I don't know if we can talk anything now... Silence can more voice than words... Everything has said through our silent conversation... He said sorry through his tears... I forgiven him through my unsaid words...
I touch his face to ensure he is real... I felt the god blessed me... Oh how I survived without him...
I felt my baby moves inside me... An acute pain swiped through my body..,which passed into my soul... I felt something wet my thighs... I want to scream my lungs out... The pain is increasing... My child... I cried loudly...
'shlok...' I clutched to his for the support... I saw his worried face...
'asthu... What happened.? '
'take me to hospital... The water broke...' I spit out to his face...
'oh god... Ayi... Dada...' He called out for help... And hold me tight to his chest...
I felt the whole energy losing from my body... I felt my backbone broke into pieces...
'i am dying shlok...' I mumbled while he carried me to the car...
'asthu... Don't say like that... I am here... I never let you go...' I felt his voice very feeble... Everything is fading away from my eyes... The life I dreamt about once...
My baby... Shlok...oh god Pls save my girl...

wow anu... it was awesome update