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Posted: 9 years ago
Knowing d truth Aastha confronted swati n swati saying that Shlok's recovery is a miracle n he is alright now.their conversation was beautifully written.Swati biding bye at them n aastha telling her to keep it a secret is nice.tho aastha knows d truth she hides it from shlok as thats what he wanted.and d last part of ashlok was beautiful.loved this-Only I know is his love Is return in my fate...
loved aastha praying in her mind 4 shlok.nice sweet ending.

Now waiting 4 Ashlok samud FF as u told me when u r free from ur studies.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Anu... Read all the chapters from Chapter 22...
Beautifully written dear... 👏👏👏 Loved this story thoroughly... Especially the simplicity of it! Superb ⭐️

Initially I had thought that Swati was a threat to Aashlok... But she was truly an angel... Poor Shlok had to suffer a lot, that too hiding it from his dear Aasthu... Thanks to Swati and thanks to God that Shlok is alright now...
Totally loved this Swati... The relation she shared with Shlok and the one she shared with Aastha is her short visit was shown so beautifully...

So now, Shlok is back and perfectly fine... Just a yearly check-up required. That's great news. AaShlok asre made for each other... And now Aastha, Shlok and their little Avantika will always be together and hope they face no problems in the future...

That was a beautiful end to a beautiful story... Great work Anu... Looking forward to more stories from you after your University Exams are over...

Love,
Neha
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Knowing d truth Aastha confronted swati n swati saying that Shlok's recovery is a miracle n he is alright now.their conversation was beautifully written.Swati biding bye at them n aastha telling her to keep it a secret is nice.tho aastha knows d truth she hides it from shlok as thats what he wanted.and d last part of ashlok was beautiful.loved this-Only I know is his love Is return in my fate...
loved aastha praying in her mind 4 shlok.nice sweet ending.

Now waiting 4 Ashlok samud FF as u told me when u r free from ur studies.



Thank u Chechi... Your words means a lot...

I will write one... First of all I need to refresh saraswatichandta's other characters...
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Posted: 9 years ago
i'm rly waiting 4 ur Ashlok Samud ff.


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Thank u Chechi... Your words means a lot...

I will write one... First of all I need to refresh saraswatichandta's other characters...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Hey Anu... Read all the chapters from Chapter 22...

Beautifully written dear...👏👏👏Loved this story thoroughly... Especially the simplicity of it! Superb⭐️

Initially I had thought that Swati was a threat to Aashlok... But she was truly an angel... Poor Shlok had to suffer a lot, that too hiding it from his dear Aasthu... Thanks to Swati and thanks to God that Shlok is alright now...
Totally loved this Swati... The relation she shared with Shlok and the one she shared with Aastha is her short visit was shown so beautifully...

So now, Shlok is back and perfectly fine... Just a yearly check-up required. That's great news. AaShlok asre made for each other... And now Aastha, Shlok and their little Avantika will always be together and hope they face no problems in the future...

That was a beautiful end to a beautiful story... Great work Anu... Looking forward to more stories from you after your University Exams are over...

Love,
Neha





Thank u Neha... Loved your words...

Will write soon... If you will stay here for reading it...

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