my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5 - Page 23

Beautiful!!

omg it was such a beautiful, emmotional and happywala update.Loved it from top to bottom.

superb as it is again

Superb update...

wow...aslok met...shlok came.what a beautiful emotional scene.but aastha's health in danger.thankfully everything ended on a good note.avantika has arrived.loved ashlok talk abt the baby n d moments they shared

oh god I missed such a beautiful updates sorry dear
tooo good ...very well written yaar

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Beautiful!!

The moment Aastha opened her eyes, she called for Shlok... And there he was... That little conversation of theirs was nicely shown... And then she wanted to know what had happened, and wanted to see her little girl...

That moment when she took her baby in her arms was beautifully described...

Lovely update Anu...

Waiting to know Shlok's truth now...

Thank u Neha ...
Ya every woman feel blessed when they hold their little one in their hands...

Astha can't able to think other than shlok...

Your are still thinking about his mystery... I am glad that I can able to keep this as suspense...

Originally posted by: rd0309

omg it was such a beautiful, emmotional and happywala update.Loved it from top to bottom.

Thank u...

I am happy that you enjoyed it

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

superb as it is again

wonderfully written

emotion were portrayed beautifully

now she is too happy to even smile

very gud it is

continue soon


PS: i have to appreciate u for taking lot of efforts for updating through ur phone and giving such a wonderful ff thanksa lot for this beautiful ff expecting a lot more from u in future pls repair ur lappy soon 😆

Thank u Sai... For reading and commenting daily...



PS: Computer is owned by my brother... No chance in it... 😭

Soon there will be a new story if god change the system as 48 hr a day... 😆

Originally posted by: vaishux

Superb update...

Such a beautiful moment for aastha and shlok seeing their little girl😳

Wow...so sweet👏

Thank u dear... 😊
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