my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART ONE


It is very difficult to focus on your work when you are so disturbed... I closed my laptop and get back to have a coffee... The lights from the pc screen make me tried to the hell already. I walked down to the kitchen... Mom is in lunch preparation...when I came up to the kitchen she looked at me..
'why don't you take a break... It is almost one week you didn't get a peaceful sleep... Don't exhaust yourself... It is not good for your health... Look how thin you got...' The way she looked at me convey the concern and love towards me... I never asked god anything beyond my mom and dad... After I ignites the stove and kept the tea pan on it I walked up to her. I hugged her from behind... I felt the motherly warmth... I stay there like that untill the coffee ready...
I walked up to the room taking the coffee mug along with me... I felt her gaze from behind... I felt sorry for my mother.. How much she will suffer for her child... 'child' I kept my hands on my growing baby bump... How cute will after she came... I am waiting for the day when happiness return to my life...
I sip from the coffee mug and kept it aside... Doctor already advised me to not take coffee at this time... So one sip is enough for me... I return to my never ending works...
'astha...' I heard mom's voice near the door.. I withdrew my gaze from the screen and looked at her...
'get ready we need to go hospital...'
'for what... I am perfectly alright...'
'do you forget about the monthly check up...?' I checked my mobile... I already kept the reminder then why I forgot it... She already seen my tears weld up in my eyes...she ran up to me and warp her strong arms around me... I want to scream my lungs out over my fate... Oh god for what I deserve this... After a few minutes I composed myself and wiped my tears...
'mom, I will come soon. Don't worry I am k...' I assured her and closed the laptop... I saw she walked down the stairs... She is getting old. Her wrinkled face and white hairs is enough for recognize her age... I bolted my room and opened the cupboard for choosing a saree... But finally decided for salwar. It is way more comfortable in this Time.
When I came downwards mom is already waiting and talking to dad over the phone...
'what he said?' I asked
'he takes the appointment already... Come lets go...' She closed the front door and we sat together on the back seat of the car... Driver neatly reversed the car and drove to the busy roads of Pune...




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Saibhargav thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Anu
Aastha is preggy
Interesting start
Thanks for taking time to write this ff despite you have lot of work
Waiting for next part hope you won't delay it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai Anu, a nice start yaar. Astha is a pregnant woman waw.
I think shlok and astha is separated.
Anyway thanks for starting a ff.
Keep it up. Continue ...
Anu mole sukamano. Molude exams ok kazhijo
Eeswaran anugrahikatte ennun.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey congrats for your new ff..
Seems to be very interesting ..
Continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saibhargav

Wow Anu

Aastha is preggy
Interesting start
Thanks for taking time to write this ff despite you have lot of work
Waiting for next part hope you won't delay it


I am working on it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Anu, a nice start yaar. Astha is a pregnant woman waw.
I think shlok and astha is separated.
Anyway thanks for starting a ff.
Keep it up. Continue ...
Anu mole sukamano. Molude exams ok kazhijo
Eeswaran anugrahikatte ennun.



Hope I can able to confuse you.. But they are not separated anyway...
thank u Chechi... Advance happy vishu..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaishux

Hey congrats for your new ff..

Seems to be very interesting ..
Continue soon👍🏼


Wait plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART TWO
we three sat down on the gynaecology department waiting area... I looked at dad... Like mom he is also getting old... Avadoot kirslokar is no more astha's young charming boy... I saw he smiled at me.. And I returns it to him... I looked around the room. Lot of ladies are waiting for their turns... I saw one couple is waiting there... They looks cute together... The young man is hold his better half's hand in his... Oh god I missed him... The day is still clear as yesterday...
FLASHBACK
'astha... Don't worry the result will positive... I am sure.' He holds my hand and whispered... I looked at his face. How charming it is... I can't able to resist loving him whenever I seeing his smile... My heart starts to dance with him...
'Mrs. Astha shlok agnihothri ' I heard the nurse called my name... We stand together and walks towards the doctor's cabin... Dr Malini is checking my reports.
'shlok agnihothri,plz sit here I want to examine your wife..' She said and take me along with her to the adjacent area which is separated by curtain. I lay there looking at the ceiling.. I felt nervous and fear around me.. I want to hold his hand... I want to look at his eyes... I want to assured by him. I want him near me...when the doctor came up to me... I spit out my worries
'doctor can you call him here...?'
'for what Mrs shlok..?men are not allowed here...' I saw she smiled through her red lips.. But I want him near me...
' but he is my husband and I want him near me...' I said firmly.she shook her head and walks out of there. Few minutes later I found he is sat near me... I looked at his face... I can see the love he hold for me... He take my hands in his hold and slowly soothe it with his fingers.. I loves the feeling whenever he do like that... The felling that he only given to me..
'you can get up now...' I heard the doctor say.I looked at her face and him... Shlok helped me from get up and arrange my saree properly...we two walks together to the doctor... She ask us to sit...
'Congratulation Mr. soon you are going to be a father... ' he hold my hand under the table.. I looked at his face. It radiates the love towards his unborn baby and the mother... I kept my other hand on my stomach conveying to my child that we love you.
'we will go for ultrasound next month... Now she is alright... Take rest properly... Don't forget about monthly check up agnihothri... You are the one need to take care of her...' She said with a smile...
He nodded with a smile... I know he is going to carry me in hands till the baby comes... That much he loves me... And I know it...
We walks together to our car after the formalities in the hospital...he looks me then and now... I know if we are now in the privacy of our room he will definitely carry me in his hand and kiss me endlessly...
He helps me to sit on the front seat. And he sat on the driving seat. And neatly moved through the roads...
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'astha agnihothri...Plz come ' I woke up from my day dream when the nurse called me inside... I walks along with my mom and sat down in front of Dr Malini after the examination.
' Astha... What is this? You are not taking care of your self... You become so thin.' Her anger is visible in her voice.. After first meeting with her she becomes very friendly to us...
'sorry Dr. Busy with office work... '
'mrs shlok you are not supposed to be... This is your sixth month... The child is starts to respond to mother... Be happy always... The last time we done the ultra sound right?' I nodded.
'don't need for now... K just take care of yourself and everytime check the baby's movement clearly...' I nodded and stood up
'astha... You need to be strong for your baby.. He will be back soon..'
' I know Dr.. He will... He promised me...' I turns and walks back to the parking lot..
While driving back to home I said
'i need to go back today..'
' why the rush? Stay some more days with us... Anyway ajju will return day after tomorrow from her trip '
'no mom... I need to be there.. The project work is already completed. Kavya maybe missing me... I will take care of myself... And I also need to sleep and I only get it from my bed...' Mom turns her head to other side. I understand what she feels now...I kept my head over her shoulder... And hold my dad's hand..
'mom, I think after marriage when you starts to live with another one your mind never allows you to stay anywhere else. You felt home when you are with your husband. Am I right ayi..?' She nodded her head...
' I am happy astha,that I choose a right choice for my child.. I know he never let me down...' I smiled at her and I Continued to keep my head on her shoulder...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey glad to see that you update first part story seems so interesting wonder where is shlok when astha is in this condition glad that her parents support her. hope you'll update next part soon we all are waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just read second part where is shlok why is he not here I think he had meet with an accident that's why he is not here anyways very nice update keep going like this...

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