my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5 - Page 18

Please don't do this to astha bring him back soon.

Please bring present Shlok in the story... The mystery is getting deeper day by day. We also want to know Shlok's point of view!!

nice it is 👍🏼
i like this Shlok 😆 but i m in hunger to know the truth
thanks for ur story
waiting for the next

A gripping story. very very well written.👏

Originally posted by: pooja186

yieee today me first to comment

miss anumol ...why u r making to cry with ur updates it's really heart touching when he calls her as aastha n she corrects aasthu ...these small things here bcm very meaningful in ur story ...keep it up always
waiting for next update

Ya you are first...

😭 😭 😭 I am also crying pooja... The name asthu is chosen by himself then how can he?
Thank u your comments... Love you 😊

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Oh no... Poor Aastha... Something grave has happened, and Shlok cannot focus on anyhing else now, not even his Aasthu and he just left leaving behind so many questions. Maybe the others knew the reason... But he didn't tell Aastha, he promised to return, though...

Wish the chapter was longer... Want to read more

Great going Anu👏

I wish to right a long one... But can't able...
Neha I am in a big confusion how to take the story forward...
shlok will come soon...

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Please don't do this to astha bring him back soon.

Awesome update anu

keep it up

Two more updates shlok will come

Thank u dear

Originally posted by: rd0309

Please bring present Shlok in the story... The mystery is getting deeper day by day. We also want to know Shlok's point of view!!

Shlok will come soon...
Two more chapters
Thank u

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

nice it is👍🏼
i like this Shlok 😆 but i m in hunger to know the truth
thanks for ur story
waiting for the next

I also love this shlok...
Shlok will come soon...

Originally posted by: pisces17

A gripping story. very very well written.👏

Waiting for the next update.

Pls update soon,.😊

Welcome to the story...
Keep commenting it will be a great encouragement...
Thank u 😊