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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

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Sorry Sai not today...part 13 is on writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
HERE ONWARDS IT IS ALL ASTHA'S FLASHBACK... DON'T CONFUSE



PART 13




FLASHBACK


I woke up while hearing shlok's angry voice... I opened my eyes and looked around... He is shouting over the phone... I kept looking at him... I saw him angry for first time... I checked my phone...it is 11 pm. 'suresh... I don't want to hear anything of that sort... Don't you know how much we going to loss... I don't care about the millions... But the reputation that my father made over the years...' I understand something is related to office... What happened... He is not in his self from morning... I saw something trouble him... 'suresh... Arrange a urgent meeting with Mr Ahuja tomorrow... Bye 'he cut the call without saying a good night... Anyway this night is not going to be a good one for him... I saw he threw the phone on to the couch... 'shlok... What happened?' 'don't you sleep yet...' 'how can I ?' 'sleep... I have some more works...' 'no. Not now... We will do it latter.. Anyway I will also come with you tomorrow...' He closed the lap and switch off the light... He lay down near to me... I kept my head on his chest...and I hugged him tight to ensure that everything will be alright... 'shlok... Are you k?...' I asked 'hmmm...' ' I love you ' I said looking at his eyes... I felt he is sad...he turned and hugged me to his heart... The place he reserved for me...
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Next morning I stirred in my sleep... I touched the place near to me still closing my eyes... I felt the emptiness and clod... I opened my eyes slowly... I expected shlok to be near me... But I didn't find him on the bed.. 'where is he?' I get down from the bed and walks towards the bathroom.. It is only 6 am... He usually like to sleep this time untill I compelled him to get up and go jogging... I knocked on the door... I didn't get any response... So I return from there... I found his track suit is still neatly placed on the cupboard... Where is he? I thought to myself and walked out of the room... Everyone is in peaceful sleep... I don't want to disturb them... I walked towards the terrace where we spend our free time... When I reach the terrace, he was sitting on the swing looking to the rising sun... I walks up to him...he didn't even realize my presence... 'shlok...' I called him. He turned his head and looked at me... 'what happened..?' I asked worry clear in my voice... He didn't say anything... He stood up and walk away like that... I stand there fix my gaze to the floor...what happened to him... He is not like this before... I walked back to the room.I saw him lay down on the bed.. When he saw me he closed his eyes not want to look at me... I lay down next to him and hugged him and kept my head on to his chest... 'shlok everything will be alright... I don't want to see u like this...' I tight my hold on him... I know he is worried about something but I am not going to let him alone face it... 'i love you shlok...' I whispered... And closed my eyes to feel his presence...>


Sorry guys making u all wait...
Edited by dazzles - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonder what was troubling Shlok... Is there any connection between this and his present condition??!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Wonder what was troubling Shlok... Is there any connection between this and his present condition??!!!



you think so ialso
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Posted: 9 years ago
gud one anu
hoping from now drama starts
Niranjan died and Shlok is in trouble
we r there almost gud going
continue soon
waiting eagerly
dont think we r not eager
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

gud one anu

hoping from now drama starts
Niranjan died and Shlok is in trouble
we r there almost gud going
continue soon
waiting eagerly
dont think we r not eager





Sai I think you are confused... There is nothing do with niranjan's death... It is a normal death...
Ya you said the right think. Shlok is in trouble...but that is created by himself...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Anu mole, thanks for ur update mole.
Nice update mole. Eniku othiri ishtamai. 👏
Pakshe oru kariyam shlokine enthu kondannu
Kanikathathu.
Anu please bring our ashlok together yaar. Y they r separate
In astha's thus condition shlok want to be with her. Yaar.
I think the phone call be behind shloks disappears. Please v want them together.
Mole sukamano. Rendu divasam njan kurachu tirakayirunnu. K
V r waiting. Continue yaar.
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Posted: 9 years ago
ISS PYAR KO KYA NAAM DOO?????????????
ANIII 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja186

ISS PYAR KO KYA NAAM DOO?????????????
ANIII 😡





Love stories always not a cake walk...pooja... Especially ashlok...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Anu mole, thanks for ur update mole.
Nice update mole. Eniku othiri ishtamai. 👏
Pakshe oru kariyam shlokine enthu kondannu
Kanikathathu.
Anu please bring our ashlok together yaar. Y they r separate
In astha's thus condition shlok want to be with her. Yaar.
I think the phone call be behind shloks disappears. Please v want them together.
Mole sukamano. Rendu divasam njan kurachu tirakayirunnu. K
V r waiting. Continue yaar.





Enike sukamalo Chechi...
Shlok evidea illalo athukondea kanikathea...
Shlok varumbo kanichu tharatto...
Ashlok will come together...
Thank u Chechi for your comments

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