my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5 - Page 16

Originally posted by: dazzles

Enike sukamalo Chechi...
Shlok evidea illalo athukondea kanikathea...
Shlok varumbo kanichu tharatto...
Ashlok will come together...
Thank u Chechi for your comments

Anu mole thanks da. Okk njan oru pudhiya topic write cheythu nalle athil comment cheyanne.pls da
Chakare gud night molu

Hi Ani
firstly i am sorry...reason as u knw
then abt ur ff
as usual...but this time different.. the way u r showing us beautiful journey of ashlok is very different here ...never imagined ...I really dnno how to comment abt previous updates..the way u written... u described each scene through diary are too good...and the 8 chapter made to blush...very well written ani
and here love the bond between astha and cute kavya...sojal...everyone...
here iam liking this astha's dear...
tottly ...a pleasure to read
it's nice to c ashlok together forever
so plzzz
introduce present SHLOK ...

I wonder what was troubling Shlok... Their company was into loss... And he was upset... Was that the only reason?

PART 14


When I again woke up from my short sleep he is all ready to go office...
'shlok... Are you going now? Wait I will prepare the breakfast... Five minutes...' I get down from the bed
'no need. I am going ...' He said and walked out of the room... He didn't said anything... The usual kiss... The goodbyes... Nothing... I felt my eyes get moist... I wiped it and walked to the washroom... The pregnancy problems starts to show...
I return to the bed and lay down on the bed... I felt really tired... I heard sojal's voice from outside...
'sojal...' I called out...
'ha astha... What happened are you k?'
'hmm... Just that I throw up...'
I saw her lips curved into a smile...
'don't worry it is usual in this time... Don't you know when I carry Kavya everyday I disturb varad due to my nausea... '
I smiled...
'where is shlok.? '
'he gone early today...'
'k you take rest I will make lemon juice for you... It will help...'
After few minutes ayi came to me...
'astha... Are you k...?' She caressed my head...
'hmm ayi... '
'have this... It will help...' She extend the glass of juice to me...
'why shlok gone early today...?'
'don't know I think some urgent meeting in office...'
'take rest... Kalindi send some foodie for you...'
'really...' My face lightened up the mention of ayi...
After ayi leave I lay down on the bed again... I want to talk to him... Don't know if he have anything... I put my hands on my tummy..and closed my eyes...
'avantika shlok agnihotri... Beautiful name shlok... It will be a girl... I am sure...'
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I sat down on the sofa... It is almost 12pm... He is not till return... I wonder what happened to him... Usually he calls me twice a day... After I got pregnant he always take care of my medicines everything... But today there is not a single message...
I heard the horns of his car... I opened the front door for him... I saw he get down from the car... His eyes are red... Is he crying... I ran up yo him... But to my shock he walked past me...not a single word... A smile nothing... I followed him to the room... I saw he took his dress and move to the washroom... I sat down on the bed... I want to know what is bothering him... That to much by avoiding me...
I heard the sound of door opens... He walked up to his side of bed and lay down on to his side...
'shlok, what is this..?'before I say anything further... He switch off the light and turned to the other side... Indicating that the conversation is over... I lay down on the bed next to him... Why he is behaving like this... If there is any problem in office we all will there to help him... Without realizing a drop of tear slide through my cheeks...
'shlok, I start nausea today morning... Sojal said it will happen during pregnancy...'
'are you k now...' I expected something more from him...
'hmm...'
'then sleep now... It is too late...'
'do you forget anything...' He slightly turned and looked at me...
'you forgot to kiss our baby...' I felt my voice shake...
He turned towards me and slowly came down to my tummy... He kept his hand to my tummy... I closed my eyes...
'good night my dear...' He kissed my tummy...but before I enjoying the moment he turned closed his eyes .. .
'good night... Shlok...' I mumbled.i don't know whether he heard it or not... The moon didn't shown up on that nigh... There was a darkness everywhere...

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Anu mole thanks da. Okk njan oru pudhiya topic write cheythu nalle athil comment cheyanne.pls da
Chakare gud night molu

Sure chechi

Originally posted by: pooja186

Hi Ani
firstly i am sorry...reason as u knw
then abt ur ff
as usual...but this time different.. the way u r showing us beautiful journey of ashlok is very different here ...never imagined ...I really dnno how to comment abt previous updates..the way u written... u described each scene through diary are too good...and the 8 chapter made to blush...very well written ani
and here love the bond between astha and cute kavya...sojal...everyone...
here iam liking this astha's dear...
tottly ...a pleasure to read
it's nice to c ashlok together forever
so plzzz
introduce present SHLOK ...

Thank u pooja...kutty. Your words means a lot...

I am gald you like it...

And about the present shlok... He will come pakka promise...

Keep commenting...

When I see your comments my lips curved to a smile... 😊

oh that was nice

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

I wonder what was troubling Shlok... Their company was into loss... And he was upset... Was that the only reason?

No, it is not only the reason... I think he is worried about something else...
Thank u Neha...

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

oh that was nice

wonder wat made Shlok to behave like this

but u written it nicely

still u held ur mystery hmm gud gud keep it up

but u r doing it superbly writing everything in phone it takes a lot i know

thanks for this ff

njoying each update

waiting for the next

Thank u Sai... Every story hold a mystery... But I am not sure about the upcoming track... Something is holding me back...
I enjoy writing in phone... I have office words in it...

Again a mysterious update indeed... Can't able to understand this sudden change in behavior of Shlok, if anything is bothering him he should share it with his better half, why he's keeping it to himself??!!!