my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5 - Page 14

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Ofcourse we are eager to read your updates Anu...

It was another beautiful update...👏

Sojal and Aastha conversation was very nice...

And then Aastha's desperation to read the diary...

Want to know about Shlok now... What has happened to him? And VArad is with Shlok... Hope to see Shlok soon..

Ashlok's fight and romance nicely shown...

Keep writing Anu 🤗

Your updates are always awaited😊

We will see shlok from astha's flashback...
I don't know how the story will turn out... I wish I don't make you all bored...

Indeed it is an emotional update, Aastha's struggle and pain clearly visible. I think others are hiding something from her?? Is it???

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

very very very great update
written superbly
emotional one
loved it a lot
gud going
waiting for next one
thanks for this wonderful ff

Thank u Sai

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Anu mole gud evening.
Nice update yaar.
But I am angry at u 😡 😡
We want shlok back to astha yaar.
I feel bad for astha. She is suffering so much mole.
Enthina engane cheyunne. Paavamale nammude asthu.
Eni karayikale pls da.
Anyway I enjoyed it yaar
Continue mole.
I am waiting yaar.

Sorry Chechi... Inne ankote karachil mathrea ullu...
Oru bucket adduthu vacho... Astha pavam Anne... Pakshea her fate is like that...njan enthu cheyum...
Comment cheyu... God will help them..lets. Pray to god ...

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Wow👏

Superbly written...

One year completed and then the dead end... Aastha's restlessness shown so nicely... Her desperation to know about Shlok, to be with him as they see their children grow...

Kavya's innocent love and Sojal's care... Nicely written...

Waiting to read more...

The family is the only support she have now...
ya she is so desperate to reach him... And she will... Ashlok are forever...

Thank u Neha...for your support...

Originally posted by: rd0309

Indeed it is an emotional update, Aastha's struggle and pain clearly visible. I think others are hiding something from her?? Is it???

Yes they are something hiding from her... But she is our astha henna... Will definitely find out...

hai anu

sooo emotional update

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai anu

wat an update it was

too emotional yar...

i feel the pain of astha poor girl how much she should suffer

wher is shlok?

what happen to shlok?

why he left to america?

did he himself went or any problem makes him to go away from astha

it was too much to bear astha in such a condition

actually she used to be happy by enjoying her pregnancy but not happening

having lovely husband, lovely family members who r caring around her but fate was not giving happiness to her wat is it yar is that right?

really felt so sad for astha n loved the way ur writing in expressing each n every emotion so nicely

waiting...to know wat happen to shlok.

I am also crying... 😭 I wonder why this shlok do like this... But everything is happened for a reason... We can't change that...
At the end everything will be alright... 😉


Some love stories never ever end... 😳
So wait for the good... 😊

Thank u di for your comments 😊

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

sooo emotional update

but it was superb

thank you

😭 it is going to be so emotional from now...