my fate ashlok ff part 26 last part updated14/5 - Page 17

Nice update Anu...

Originally posted by: rd0309

Again a mysterious update indeed... Can't able to understand this sudden change in behavior of Shlok, if anything is bothering him he should share it with his better half, why he's keeping it to himself??!!!

Ya... He needs to share it with her... She will there for him... But I think this is something more serious...

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Nice update Anu...

Shlok upset and crying... Aastha worried to see Shlok's changed behaviour. Some major issue, I am sure... Shlok dhould share it with Aastha...

Waiting to know more...

Loving the story... Keep going Anu😊

Thank u Neha... Ya there is something hold back him... Don't know how she hanndle it...

hai anu...😊

sorry for late had internal exams
emotional update day by day iam getting curious ...

PART 15
I woke up a little late... When I get down from the bed I noticed shlok's traveller back is kept in the couch...
Before I call him... He entered the room... He is in his formal dress. I am sure he cried. His eyes is turned to red. I looked at him and to the bag
'astha..., I need to go America... I don't know when I am going to return... Take care of your self...' He take the bag down.. And turned to go
'shlok...' I called him
'what is this all? What I do to get such a treatment... Forgive me if I do anything wrong... But not leave me I can't breath without you...' I felt my voice shake...
'astha...' He said my name...
'asthu...' I corrected him..
'i need to go... It is important...'
'more than me...' I asked
'maybe yes...'
'i don't care about the millions you make...but I need you...'
'astha... Don't make it difficult... You never understand my reasons..i need to go that is the last thing... Don't ever try to call me... There is nothing to talk to you... If you call me you never going to get an answer from me...'
'when you going to return?'
'i don't know...I promise you I will...'
'what will I said to avantika ...? Will you take me along with u...?'
Without a single answer he walked out of the room... I stand there without knowing exactly what happened? The one who promised to stay with me till the end, the one who loved me to his heart, the one who changed me in everyway... Walked out of my life without a proper closure... I don't know what to do or say... I felt I am standing alone on the path... And the darkness cover me with it wings... little I know is the tears are flowing from my eyes... I kept my hands over my baby to ensure her that mom will there for you...
few minutes later... The reality stuck on me... I wiped my tears and walked back him... I want to stop him... I descend through the stairs... I saw everyone in the living room...ayi is crying... Every others... When I walked past them I heard dada's voice.
'he gone astha...' I looked in to his eyes... He is also crying... I stood there like a statue... I don't know if I have a life... Everything is gone...
'no.., he can't...' I felt my vision blurred... I felt dizzy... The darkness... I closed my eyes... I don't know what happened after that...

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai anu...😊

i cant tell u that wat u writing is such an emotional one yar...

but really loved it the way of ur writing which shows that infront of my eyes...👏

it was like some touchy n emotional movie...😭

y shlok was upset yar... y cant he share with astha

is that big prblm to not upset astha but was really sad seeing his shlok in such situation...

wat makes him to change his behaviour...

ofcourse he dont want to share atleast infront of astha he should behave normal na...

anyway i hope will get answers in coming way...

but make ashlok happy yar...

good going...dear

eagerly waiting...for next one

Ya he need to share it with her... But we all are humans we need to take all the sorrows to myself... For our loved ones... Some bitter truth will hurt us... Something is not need to be revealed...
Thank u for your comments...i really waited for you...

yieee today me first to comment

miss anumol ...why u r making to cry with ur updates it's really heart touching when he calls her as aastha n she corrects aasthu ...these small things here bcm very meaningful in ur story ...keep it up always
waiting for next update

Originally posted by: pooja186

sorry for late had internal exams
emotional update day by iam getting curious ...

Tight your belts and wait fir the coming updates... Shlok will come soon... To the story...
Best if luck for your exams...
Write well...
My prayers are with you

Oh no... Poor Aastha... Something grave has happened, and Shlok cannot focus on anyhing else now, not even his Aasthu and he just left leaving behind so many questions. Maybe the others knew the reason... But he didn't tell Aastha, he promised to return, though...